hi, here's my response to the evolution prompt!! https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#evolution hope u like it :D - j
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finally did the q&a blog post!! long overdue but it's here now :D https://manyface.neocities.org/blog#190524
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is there a webring for systems... we kind of want to make one but terrified of creating something that attracts discourse and hate...
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Hello, we would like to join your webring! URL: https://manyface.neocities.org/ SLUG: manyface TITLE: manyface world DESC: "A nice place for a system called Manyface. We like to make art and do lots of other things!"
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manyface
2 years ago
CONTACT: https://manyface.neocities.org/contact RSS FEED: https://manyface.neocities.org/feed.xml
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Here's our prompt fill for the week of May 6th. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#trace - Efir
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ryomakesthings
2 years ago
love the use of the Shakespearean sonnet and iambic pentameter, you always build such beautiful imagery in your poems. especially like the recurring contrast between the spiritual and carnal planes!
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owlroost
2 years ago
That first line? Brilliant. Got my attention immediately because of the imagery of it. The first lines for each stanza, really, but especially the very first one.
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manyface
2 years ago
@ryo Thank you so much! I appreciate this. I actually read a lot of Baudelaire poems from The Flowers of Evil because @melxncholyman has a page dedicated to them, so this was sort of a response to what I read. Although, I am all about carnal spirituality! - Efir
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manyface
2 years ago
@owlroost Thank you so much. I really wanted to bring the image of trace elements of decaying bodies being a part of living plants. - Efir
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I love your writing. You have such a way with words.
thank you!!!
such an evocative poem, loved the story! really interesting rhyme scheme too, kind of like a double triplet variation of terza rima
thank you!! it's based off the frog princess fairytale, the slavic version of it! and the rhyme scheme is genuinely my favourite rhyme scheme to use... i think we first encountered it in "the destroyer" by robert graves, and then decided that it was just the best rhyme scheme and ours now. - j