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this week's fill! i love the imagery of the oroborous (the serpent that eats his tail) and decided to write a little poem. I'm not great with rhyming so I think it sounds a little clunky, but I would love to turn this one into a song once day, maybe with the last stanza as the chorus! https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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finally managed to write this weeks entry. it took a while for the prompt to sink in, but i found the inspiration at 3AM. this is certainly one of my more vulnerable pieces: https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
2 weeks ago
thank you for sharing this, I can really feel the imprint that your grandmother left in that space - I don't think the departed's spaces could ever not be theirs anymore, and I believe you put that into words beautifully. hope you're doing well!
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manyface
2 weeks ago
i can definitely relate to this one, and i hope you're doing alright! your writing is very sincere and bittersweet, so thank you so much for sharing it! - j
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happy disability pride month btw!
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btw for everyone who takes medication and lives anywhere it gets hot, check if you meds make you heat intolerant! stay safe ^-^
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I like this, in a sense it feels like an ode to life itself in all its facets through the cyclicality of the oroborous. I think your passion for its imagery shines through very clearly!
this made me smile a lot as i read it. i like the ouroboros too and this poem felt so earnestly joyful and appreciative of the cyclicality of the cosmos!
loveeee your choice of language, feels very flowy and powerful at the same time :))
oh this is so gorgeous n i Def feel like it could make such a cool song !!