ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love haikus! I really like how you interpreted the prompt, it's a very unique concept and you put it very well - I can almost hear a clock ticking faintly in the distance. really like it!
manyface
1 year ago
this is great, thank you so much for sharing. i like how it has a twist despite being so concise. it's powerful. - shades
percevalprintpress
1 year ago
thank you!! yes I always try to challenge myself to end a haiku with a new meaning/twist
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
it's incredible how much soul you can condense in shorter pieces, your last entry is very bittersweet. also in love with last week's prompt, came out really well!
percevalprintpress
1 year ago
@ryomakesthings Thank you!! Most of my poems start out longer and I cut them down in editing but this is also me being obsessive about making every word have a meaning
awwwh that's such a lovely little tribute. it's so hard when you know things are lost, but memories do live on :]
@tehuan thank you!!
the brief encounters one is soooo biting and punchy i'm obsessed... and the fav place one is so bittersweet :') and the one abt your aunt! it's so sad yet full of resonant love! you say so much in such few words, it's inspiring!