this is really great, i feel for you. thank you for sharing your words and experiences!
this is such a beautiful thought - we don't talk enough about how non-linear life can be at times. congratulations on your first piece!
this is such a strong and vulnerable piece of writing - thank you so much for sharing it with us, this is beyond beautiful!
I think you encapsulated perfectly the idea of adulthood as compromise, there is something so beautiful about how you used such a small moment in daily life to communicate a strong concept!
absolutely love the imagery you built, the visual element was a really nice touch!
i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)
this is really nice and bittersweet, im no poetry expert but i love the way you structured this. simple and poignant, i love it