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ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love this, it gives me this image of a tiny guy just floating off indefinitely. it's haunting and soothing at the same time!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
absolutely love the vocabulary you used and the imagery you built with it, great piece!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
first of all, thank you for your vulnerability - such a sweet and thoughtful piece! I especially like the line about making childhood memories as an adult, and 'I felt my youth'. beautiful work, hope you're okay!
chimeramanticore
1 year ago
@ryomakesthings thank you! i cant claim one good night fixed me lol but i think it refreshed me/put me on the right track. hoping things look up from here :]
caesthoffe
1 year ago
god that last line hits hard, and the yearning for the comfort of the past is so relatable. love this entry.
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
God, this made me cry. thank you for sharing with us, it's a beautiful, bittersweet piece. I relate to those inner contradictions and struggling with what they have to say about our essence. I hope you're alright!
manyface
1 year ago
thank you ryo, i'm okay! i write this kind of thing to exorcise it from my mind. i'm sorry it made you cry - i hope you're okay too! and thank you again. it was my dad's birthday on monday, and i wrote him a poem where i told him i love him without using those words. so he knows, at least.
chimeramanticore
1 year ago
this was awful to read in the best possible way. i cant say ive done anything quite as intense but i know those conflicted feelings and urges all too well. i hope everything is okay, or that things are getting easier
manyface
1 year ago
@chimeramanticore thank you for reading, and i'm sorry you relate - it's tough! everything is alright and things are much easier than they were 4 years ago! i really am glad that i can talk to him again...
tehuan
1 year ago
yeah of course! i totally understand. i hope you're able to return at some point :]
manyface
1 year ago
this is really good, i hope being in that place helps you feel more connected to your grandmother. please take care of yourself!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@manyface thank you! I am doing well now, just been very interested in reflecting on mortality lately x
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love how precise and visceral the descriptions of june 11th are, they make the poem feel very much live. I also adore june 17th, there is something almost brutal in how short it is and how much it leaves open to the viewer. great job!
8ballbice
1 year ago
thank u for reading ryo, it rlly warms my heart to hear ur perspectives! ;__; <3
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I like how despite the poems being wildly different in format and content, they still communicate a very consistent and visceral artistic voice. love the Perpetual Grilled Cheese one!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
love how descriptive the piece is, and how fluid and adaptable the format is too!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@lostletters thank you so much - and nice, always great to hear about more people picking up the sport!
canines
1 year ago
i just went through reading all of ur previous works and wow. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YOUR WORK IS SO GOOD!!!!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@symphonic thank you!! that's really flattering, so glad you enjoyed my work :)
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
very powerful imagery, I really like the concept of systemhood as this river with different currents that are interconnected yet distinct from each other (that is if I read it correctly, apologies if not)!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo you can read it however you want!! but thank you so much, i'm glad you got that image/idea from it :) there was a lot i was trying to say with this piece and i'm glad i could say at least some of it!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I really like the format, I think it really gets across this sort of dichotomy of hope and despair finding their synthesis in the compromise of existence. It's quite powerful in its simplicity, I really like it!
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this work feels very Lovecraftian, absolutely love the description of the entity and how suddenly it breaks the calm of the world of the first few lines. can't stop thinking about 'a god without eyes', I really like this piece!