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damn, your writing is so intense and clear and… has this arresting presence that demands a reader’s full attention. it’s beautiful and cool!
such a powerful piece in its brevity, every single piece of imagery you built is so beautiful and haunting!
thank you both so much!!! i often worry that I'm trying to condense too many things into really short texts so I'm really glad it worked!!!!
"maybe when you're done there won't be enough of you left to feel the loss." is such a powerful line. Agreed that the brevity of this piece adds to the impact- it doesn't have to be long to hit like a truck. Well done.
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damn, your writing is so intense and clear and… has this arresting presence that demands a reader’s full attention. it’s beautiful and cool!
such a powerful piece in its brevity, every single piece of imagery you built is so beautiful and haunting!
thank you both so much!!! i often worry that I'm trying to condense too many things into really short texts so I'm really glad it worked!!!!
"maybe when you're done there won't be enough of you left to feel the loss." is such a powerful line. Agreed that the brevity of this piece adds to the impact- it doesn't have to be long to hit like a truck. Well done.