today I uploaded the piece I submitted for Salad Magazine! You can read the full piece and commentary here https://zine.kalechips.net/issues/3/index.html x
this is such a beautiful poem! i'm glad that ikb 79 speaks to you so much, it really is a wonderful shade of blue. - j
i love this sm ! what a perfect moment to focus in on (hi sorry didn't want to change accounts to reply)
this was so fun to read!!! i really like the formatting of this one, i think its so unique
this was so cute and cool!! we liked this a lot, you're so creative with all the different formats you use! - j and shades
i really liked this one! it really highlights just how panicked one's anxious thoughts can become, and it really nailed it on the head with how quickly it tends to escalate too. i especially like the touch of making it a run-on.
i love the rambling style of this!! i feel like it helps add to the emotion of the piece mwah
i like this a lot!! it's very cool and the run on structure is excellent. great work as always, ryo!
really liked the escalation of scale and how you cheekily tied it back to the beginning ^^