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owlroost museariadne

1 year ago

Just finished the last two prompts: evolution (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#evolve) and trace elements (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#trace). Somehow they both wound up being about growing up and nostalgia.

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

such impressive writing, very picturesque and well-crafted yet speaking to a very raw inner world. both a joy to read!

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

hellooo my prompt fill for this week is up! https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/evolution had so much fun with this.... careful with the "unleash the though process" thing, there's A Lot lmao

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grlrot 1 year ago

oh i LOVE this, the last stanza especially, and the use of slashes to make it keep going is so awesome...

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owlroost 1 year ago

That second stanza... that Resonated. May those that come after have bread pudding and tangerines (good taste).

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the bittersweet feeling of this poem - especially the wall of slashes at the end, the empty space is very powerful!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Love this!

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grlrot museariadne

1 year ago

hi!! i'd love to join, i've made a page here https://grlrot.neocities.org/writing :D

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tehuan 1 year ago

omg yay !! excited to have u :]] would you mind making ur page designated as /muse instead of /writing ? also totally okay to like... put /muse pages under /writing categories & stuff. just trying to maintain continuity as much as possible ! regardless, will add u soon !

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grlrot 1 year ago

it's done!! i had sm fun doing the last 3 prompts, excited for next week's!

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi everyone! your answers for this last week's prompt were all beautiful :] i'm excited to see what you have to say about this next one! write about evolution and devolution. how do we unravel & re-ravel? think about what histories our bodies & communities & species & worlds are made of.

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

Here's our prompt fill for the week of May 6th. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#trace - Efir

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love the use of the Shakespearean sonnet and iambic pentameter, you always build such beautiful imagery in your poems. especially like the recurring contrast between the spiritual and carnal planes!

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owlroost 1 year ago

That first line? Brilliant. Got my attention immediately because of the imagery of it. The first lines for each stanza, really, but especially the very first one.

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manyface 1 year ago

@ryo Thank you so much! I appreciate this. I actually read a lot of Baudelaire poems from The Flowers of Evil because @melxncholyman has a page dedicated to them, so this was sort of a response to what I read. Although, I am all about carnal spirituality! - Efir

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manyface 1 year ago

@owlroost Thank you so much. I really wanted to bring the image of trace elements of decaying bodies being a part of living plants. - Efir

mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

made my fill for this week + the softness prompt :) https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/trace ; https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/softness

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manyface 1 year ago

this is a really cool interpretation of the prompt!!! well done, i liked reading it a lot!!

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manyface 1 year ago

oh omg i just saw the softness prompt... it's so lovely!!! you did an amazing job!! i really feel that about my sister!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

there is so much emotional vulnerability and openness in your work - I especially like how you used the comic format in the prompt from a few weeks ago!

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

mine for this week, although i think i am a little late ^.^ https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse

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manyface 1 year ago

this is really beautiful and moving!! well done!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love the imagery you built, it's very raw yet carefully crafted!

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8ballbice 1 year ago

thank you both so much!!

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caesthoffe museariadne

1 year ago

may 6th fillllllllll :3 https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-14

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this is such a sweet poem, there is almost a kind of nostalgia in it. also love how compact it is, I think the length works really well!

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manyface 1 year ago

ohhh this is lovely!!! it makes me happy to think about!!!

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dogblog 1 year ago

Love it, relatable.

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canines museariadne

1 year ago

may 6 prompt fill! https://symphony.surgery/muse/maynine

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canines 1 year ago

real poem not just rambly prose this tiem

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the choice of formatting it as a prayer, it's a real bittersweet poem in that sense - how it speaks to a certain hope within the desperation and grief. great job!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is extremely beautiful, i love it so much. pj strikes once again with poetry that speaks to my soul - j

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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cassava museariadne

1 year ago

my response to the may 6th prompt! kind of a simple one but https://cassava.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love how you interpreted the prompt - it's such a raw feeling that you're describing. really powerful piece!

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manyface 1 year ago

i like this a lot!!! it's very powerful and visceral and i enjoy that about poetry in general, so well done :D - j

ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

veeery soon after my last one, but here's my response to the May 6th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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vagueshape 1 year ago

ooo i love how you phrased this, it's simple but evocative. "everything of the world, and nothing of myself" is such a good line.

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caesthoffe 1 year ago

love love LOVE the structure, repetition is one of my favorite poettic devices !!!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an excellent poem, it's really punchy and gets the message across beautifully without being too forceful... well done!!

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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

back from my small hiatus, this prompt was almost perfect for me to talk about this morning's coffee https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

obsessed with the humour and lightness of this, and the detailed culinary notes. love it!

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vagueshape 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings thank you!!! i felt like writing something fun, but also complaining about that cup of coffee lol (i ended up finishing it, it somehow got better, or maybe i just got used to the taste)

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manyface 1 year ago

omg this was so funny and heartwarming to read... i'm imagining it perfectly, thank you for sharing!

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi y'all !! new prompt is up for this week :]

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manyface 1 year ago

oooh!!! this prompt is really interesting :00

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tehuan 1 year ago

i'm so glad you like it !! :]

halcybutton 1 year ago

very much enjoy the prompt this week :3

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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halcybutton museariadne

1 year ago

hi! i'd like to join :3 you can find my button at "home" and my writings at "/writings/hub"

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tehuan 1 year ago

yay, lovely !! i'll add you soon :] and the new prompt will be up soon !

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museariadne 1 year ago

actually, would you be able to tag your writing page as /muse? it's okay if it's /writings/muse if that's smth you want for organization, but i'm hoping to keep us all as cohesive as possible with our page names & all ! :]

museariadne 1 year ago

i'll wait until you update it to put ur button on the site just so i don't have to change it again n mess with it, so just lmk when it's set up ! :]

halcybutton 1 year ago

i got it updated to be muse!

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halcybutton 1 year ago

well, writings/muse haha

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

just posted my response to the April 29th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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the-chavez-zone 1 year ago

i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]

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manyface 1 year ago

this is awesome!!!

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siph museariadne

1 year ago

finished my muse for this week, it's about friends and broken friendships https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!

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manyface 1 year ago

the language here is so beautiful and tender!

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canines museariadne

1 year ago

i posted my fill for this week, its about disability :) https://symphony.surgery/muse/mayfive

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!

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