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1 year ago

ahhh i dunno how much ill write since i'm super picky about what resonates with me promptwise but i did a little thing in 2nd person and it was fun :o) https://angelogistics.neocities.org/blog/ariadne

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tehuan 1 year ago

wow, this was so cool. i love love love sensory details in writing n you're so good at it !

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percevalprintpress museariadne

1 year ago

I just posted my prompt fill for this week! https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/ I now realize that I really didn't write in 2nd person but first. Maybe I'll try again later!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Ok updated with another poem that's actually in 2nd person!! Yay

tehuan 1 year ago

both of these are wonderful ! i love how sort of targeted they feel.. v cool :]

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owlroost museariadne

1 year ago

Finally got around to this week's Muse prompt. https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#you

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bondiaries 1 year ago

i love love love this... the crawling into skull part is so real and i love the imagery you present. brain wetsuits!!!

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angelogistics 1 year ago

ohhhhh you scratch my brain so well i hope i get the honor of being a recognized patron at your fishmarket :o) gonna go read all your stuff hehe

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tehuan 1 year ago

i loveeeed the sensory experience of this ! so cool

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the-chavez-zone museariadne

1 year ago

i haven't shared my entries here yet because i've been shy, but i'm particularly proud of this one https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse8

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fairygore 1 year ago

oh lovely :)

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

I love it! Rainy mornings are my favorite

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tehuan 1 year ago

this is so wonderful :] i love the phrase 'this is yours to drink in'

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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

new entry! inspired by a dream i had last night https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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tehuan 1 year ago

i love this! sort of ominous feeling but also feels like a friend telling you a story

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owlroost 1 year ago

Those sorts of dreams are why I keep a dream journal- helps with letting the feelings lingering from it go. Can definitely relate.

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commemorative-ghosts museariadne

1 year ago

I'm early for a change. https://chills.neocities.org/writing/muse

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tehuan 1 year ago

i love the pointed language.. it really drew me in! you set the scene so well in yr writing

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commemorative-ghosts 1 year ago

Thank you, Xalli. I have been attempting to write with more brevity of late.

melxncholyman museariadne

1 year ago

posted my entry for this week's prompt. nothing too crazy, just a stream of consciousness but 2nd person hits different https://melxncholyman.neocities.org/muse

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commemorative-ghosts 1 year ago

Vivid and succinct. I especially enjoy the use of repetition.

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tehuan 1 year ago

oh this is so wonderful. chills is v correct that it's so vivid!

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owlroost 1 year ago

This is stunning- love the use of Greek. I could see this as a song (honestly, I'm a little tempted to ask you if I could put it to music).

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melxncholyman 1 year ago

@owlroost omg—you have my full permission to do so, i would be honoured

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owlroost 1 year ago

Just did the sample recording- I think this is going to be neat. I leaned into glitchy effects for the repeated bits of text.

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Really love it!

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angelogistics 1 year ago

obsessed with being thrust into other people's perspectives/ worlds when they write in second person, great job putting me in a new place :o) <3

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museariadne

1 year ago

i completely forgot to actually post the prompt yesterday! sorry about that 😅 here's this week's prompt though! try writing in the second person. address your audience and sit with them as you tell your story. see how this direct connection affects how you write.

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moondvsted museariadne

1 year ago

i'd love to join! here's my page https://moondvsted.neocities.org/writing/muse/ and my button https://f2.toyhou.se/file/f2-toyhou-se/images/47052159_rd5iWTFAMmQWrMr.gif ^_^

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museariadne 1 year ago

ofc !! will add you rn :]]

siph museariadne

1 year ago

This was a fun one. I'm not sure if i strictly adhered to the prompt necessarily but it was nice https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/

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kph 1 year ago

love love LOVE this. love how thoughtful it is without judging the memory morphing as good or bad. love the phrase "dawn-bright loam". thanks for sharing!

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kph 1 year ago

also showed this to my gf who started gardening in the past couple years and she loves it too

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commemorative-ghosts 1 year ago

This is gorgeous; it reminds me of how our experience with things changes as we age, such as with a favourite childhood film as an adult, and the cycle of rediscovery.

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melxncholyman 1 year ago

adore it. the stew imagery is absolutely lovely

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tehuan 1 year ago

i love this so much!! super nice imagery :]

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percevalprintpress museariadne

1 year ago

I posted my prompt fill for this week. I'm not sure if I quite suceeded at blending 2 senses though but it was fun https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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inkcaps 1 year ago

The image in the first few stanzas are so striking!! * __ * You really succeeded in capturing how scent is tied so closely to memory!!

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kph 1 year ago

the straightforwardness of this is very clean, very powerful. it feels like a monologue, almost, a warning with weight from the line breaks. i like how it closes and ends with 'you never forget the smell'--giving it the definite article and repetition instead of a description

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kph 1 year ago

like you would with a horror movie monster

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tehuan 1 year ago

you definitely did :] i love this specific twist on it !

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commemorative-ghosts museariadne

1 year ago

This new prompt is quite a lot of fun, isn’t it? Or perhaps I spend too much time blending senses in the first place. https://chills.neocities.org/writing/muse

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kph museariadne

1 year ago

I've loved all of the prompts, but I've been swamped all month! Finished up and posted the piece I started for the feb(!!) echo prompt, hopefully freeing myself from the "oh god i can't read anyone else's before I write my version what if i can never have an original idea" cycle. Looking forward to catching up on folks' writings!

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kph 1 year ago

https://kph.neocities.org/muse

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owlroost 1 year ago

Hey, if it's any comfort, I read other people's pieces all the time before writing my own. It prompts me to think about the prompt in new ways, which gives me a more original idea than what I started with!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Just read your prompt for this week - loved it especially the last few lines!

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kph 1 year ago

thanks!!

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi lovelies ! i have another prompt for y'all 🥰 write a piece in which you blend two physical senses. maybe focus in on the taste or shape of words, or the feel of an old memory. imagine & sink into those sensations and see what comes up.

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owlroost 1 year ago

Looking forward to this- this prompt hits differently when you have synesthesia. :P

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liedown1 museariadne

1 year ago

Did the one for this week! trying to go back and do ones i missed, too https://liedown1.neocities.org/museariadne

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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

new muse entry! i went a bit more metaphorical with the cycle of the seasons and how it relates to my own mental health. https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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liedown1 1 year ago

i definitely relate to the questions this poem asks in the face of seasonal change and wanting to imitate it and at least get some ounce of that guarantee for regrowth after cold devastation

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kph 1 year ago

I really liked this piece! The questions posed to the trees are so earnestly simple, so concisely phrased. And I love the sounds of "only whispers what the wind will allow" as well as the idea. Really cool.

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