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 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            this was very beautiful!! thank you for sharing and we hope it all feels a little lighter sometimes,
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            this is such a raw and honest poem, and a very well-crafted one at that. It's almost like I can feel the weight of their absence myself, great job and hope you're doing well!
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            this was very beautiful and very sad!!! i think about this sort of thing a lot too.. - charlize
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            incredible poem, and very bittersweet - it speaks to absence in the purest sense of the word, as something immaterial that lingers in the ether. I like it a lot!
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            @caesthoffe thank you so much hehe!!! i got inspired by a writing workshop i went to :3
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            absolutely adore the format, I think you captured perfectly how haunting digital ghosts can feel. really resonate with the part about 'personality in bite-sized pieces'!
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            @ryo Thank you so much! We are glad you like it, J felt pretty clever about that line, ahaha! - Efir
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            thanks for sharing this with us!! it is really nice to hear that your travel anxiety no longer remains !
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            what a beautiful reflection, and a very interesting interpretation of the prompt!
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            i really liked reading this!! thank you so much for sharing, it's very bittersweet!
 tehuan
            
              1 year ago
            tehuan
            
              1 year ago
            
            for sure! i get it :] feel free to rejoin if you'd like to at some point ! we'd love to have you back
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            what a powerful piece - there is something really cathartic about its quiet rage. as always, hope you are doing okay!
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            @ryo thank you so much!!! thank you for always reading and responding, you're awesome. and yeah i'm okay, i just have a lot of feelings!
 manyface
            
              1 year ago
            manyface
            
              1 year ago
            
            ryo this is awesome. i have heard of the immortal jellyfish now! and this made me very sad, but i am happy you shared this with us!
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            @manyface ah, sorry about that! and thank you, I'm really glad y'all enjoyed it - I'm finding that writing about death helps me demystify it, almost. also - never not thinking about the immortal jellyfish!
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            this work feels very Lovecraftian, absolutely love the description of the entity and how suddenly it breaks the calm of the world of the first few lines. can't stop thinking about 'a god without eyes', I really like this piece!
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            I love this, it gives me this image of a tiny guy just floating off indefinitely. it's haunting and soothing at the same time!
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            absolutely love the vocabulary you used and the imagery you built with it, great piece!
 ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            ryomakesthings
            
              1 year ago
            
            first of all, thank you for your vulnerability - such a sweet and thoughtful piece! I especially like the line about making childhood memories as an adult, and 'I felt my youth'. beautiful work, hope you're okay!
 chimeramanticore
            
              1 year ago
            chimeramanticore
            
              1 year ago
            
            @ryomakesthings thank you! i cant claim one good night fixed me lol but i think it refreshed me/put me on the right track. hoping things look up from here :]
 caesthoffe
            
              1 year ago
            caesthoffe
            
              1 year ago
            
            god that last line hits hard, and the yearning for the comfort of the past is so relatable. love this entry.
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oh i adore this!! your writing is so visual and flows so beautifully! i kept getting stuck on every line and wanting to live in it.
I love the hope that comes through in this piece, the idea that absence can symbolise not only what was lost but also what can be gained in its place - at least, that's what I got from it. I especially like the final line!
@grlrot Thank you so much. I am sure Charlize would greatly appreciate that compliment - it's a beautiful way to phrase that sentiment, too! - Efir
@ryo Yes, that is what Charlize intended to write into this piece - the absence of fear, of fury, of hatred, manifesting as the love that fills the empty space. Thank you so much for your compliments! - Efir