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ryomakesthings
1 year ago
really sorry for your loss. I appreciate you writing about the transition period where the wound is healing but the scar is still staring back, I think you did it and your pet justice. hope you're okay!
manyface
1 year ago
i'm really sorry for your loss! as ryo said, your writing conveys that transitive grieving period very well, and i'm tearing up from reading it. please take care of yourself! - j
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
thank you for sharing this, I can really feel the imprint that your grandmother left in that space - I don't think the departed's spaces could ever not be theirs anymore, and I believe you put that into words beautifully. hope you're doing well!
manyface
1 year ago
i can definitely relate to this one, and i hope you're doing alright! your writing is very sincere and bittersweet, so thank you so much for sharing it! - j
tehuan
1 year ago
ahh how lovely !! you're always free to respond to prompts with whatever feels right-- fiction, screen writing, poetry, personal essays / journal entries, research, etc. whatever it inspires & however it brings you the most joy and fulfillment is best ! will add you to the members list now :]
the-frog-blog
1 year ago
imma actually wait, its like 1 am my time. gn, or whatever time appropriate gesture that fits your time
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I really like how you format your pieces, and I love how visceral and uncompromising the writing is in this one - I think it paints the picture perfectly, your choice of words is very apt!
manyface
1 year ago
I really enjoyed reading it - I love your interpretation of the prompt, and it's so grotesque in a beautiful way. - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
damn, your writing is so intense and clear and… has this arresting presence that demands a reader’s full attention. it’s beautiful and cool!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
such a powerful piece in its brevity, every single piece of imagery you built is so beautiful and haunting!
grlrot
1 year ago
thank you both so much!!! i often worry that I'm trying to condense too many things into really short texts so I'm really glad it worked!!!!
owlroost
1 year ago
"maybe when you're done there won't be enough of you left to feel the loss." is such a powerful line. Agreed that the brevity of this piece adds to the impact- it doesn't have to be long to hit like a truck. Well done.
tehuan
1 year ago
yay ! so happy to have you. and omg of course !! you're free to answer as many old prompts as you'd like :] the point of this club is to inspire & create community above all else !
grlrot
1 year ago
oh i adore this!! your writing is so visual and flows so beautifully! i kept getting stuck on every line and wanting to live in it.
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love the hope that comes through in this piece, the idea that absence can symbolise not only what was lost but also what can be gained in its place - at least, that's what I got from it. I especially like the final line!
manyface
1 year ago
@grlrot Thank you so much. I am sure Charlize would greatly appreciate that compliment - it's a beautiful way to phrase that sentiment, too! - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo Yes, that is what Charlize intended to write into this piece - the absence of fear, of fury, of hatred, manifesting as the love that fills the empty space. Thank you so much for your compliments! - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
this was very beautiful!! thank you for sharing and we hope it all feels a little lighter sometimes,
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
this is such a raw and honest poem, and a very well-crafted one at that. It's almost like I can feel the weight of their absence myself, great job and hope you're doing well!
manyface
1 year ago
this was very beautiful and very sad!!! i think about this sort of thing a lot too.. - charlize
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
incredible poem, and very bittersweet - it speaks to absence in the purest sense of the word, as something immaterial that lingers in the ether. I like it a lot!
manyface
1 year ago
@caesthoffe thank you so much hehe!!! i got inspired by a writing workshop i went to :3
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
absolutely adore the format, I think you captured perfectly how haunting digital ghosts can feel. really resonate with the part about 'personality in bite-sized pieces'!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo Thank you so much! We are glad you like it, J felt pretty clever about that line, ahaha! - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
thanks for sharing this with us!! it is really nice to hear that your travel anxiety no longer remains !
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
what a beautiful reflection, and a very interesting interpretation of the prompt!
manyface
1 year ago
i really liked reading this!! thank you so much for sharing, it's very bittersweet!
tehuan
1 year ago
for sure! i get it :] feel free to rejoin if you'd like to at some point ! we'd love to have you back
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
what a powerful piece - there is something really cathartic about its quiet rage. as always, hope you are doing okay!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo thank you so much!!! thank you for always reading and responding, you're awesome. and yeah i'm okay, i just have a lot of feelings!
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beautifully written, and horribly gut-wrenching. your writing is always extremely impressive, and I can only wish you the absolute best for all the life you do get to live - thank you for choosing to spend a little bit of that time sharing your art with us, truly.
Thankfully, I get more than ten years to live if this diagnosis gets confirmed. I just won't be able to work or live independently for as long as I'd hoped for.
your writing is so beautiful and moving, and absolutely devastating. the hope that runs through it is so powerful despite how terrible the circumstances are. please keep that hope alive, and stay safe. thank you for sharing your writing! - j
The part where you're looking up at your body at thinking it isn't you yet it's still responsible for much of what you experience in life is very relatable and saddening to me as someone with chronic illnesses. Thanks for sharing and I hope you keep doing your best with the body you've got.