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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

this week's fill: about grief and brief childhood memories https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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owlroost 1 year ago

He sounds like he was a wonderful man. I feel like I got a little of your love towards him through your writing- he might be gone, but it's okay to still care.

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manyface 1 year ago

this was extremely beautiful and heartfelt!! it makes me think of my own grandparents, my maternal grandfather died when i was 7 too... all your emotions are okay and valid and please take as long as you need to grieve! - j

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

thank you so much for sharing this with us - it's such a bittersweet piece. I remember feeling that same misplaced anger you speak of - I don't think we ever fully stop grieving but I believe it means they left an impact on you and that piece of them will be with you for as long as you live.

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

a bit late but I posted my response to the latest prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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owlroost 1 year ago

Love the use of repetition and spacing! Adds to that feeling of glancing at someone hoping they'll accidentally meet your eyes.

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manyface 1 year ago

seconding owlroost! the use of space here is wonderful! you did a very good job of conveying that emotion of brief serendipity! - j

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

my fill for this weeks prompt,! https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I absolutely love your vocabulary and the imagery you paint through it, very evocative!

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manyface 1 year ago

wow, this was so cool and visceral and interesting to read... your word choices are sublime!!! - j

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owlroost museariadne

1 year ago

Responded to the brief encounters prompt- fair warning that this is a heavy one, but it's a story I keep telling because it gives me hope that it happened at all. There are some good people out there, folks! https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#monkey

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falconiforme 1 year ago

That was a lovely story, thank you for sharing it :)

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this is such a well-written yet raw piece - I definitely recognise the long-gone pattern of intrusive thoughts. I also really appreciate the advice at the beginning and at the end, it's all so very thoughtful. thank you so much for sharing!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is a really good piece, and i am really happy that you had gabriel in your life for that brief encounter. we've struggled with suicidality too, your piece really captures that thought pattern well. my sister's bf is called gabriel, maybe good people are just called that... - j

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sneekrealm 1 year ago

ok this made me cry (tho ive fortunately not had to deal w such thoughts, but simply seem to be slipping into some rough patch these past couple days that im tryin to handle ok enough)

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi everyone! i'm SO sorry for not posting a prompt this monday! i tried to, but our wifi has been horrible and it seems like it never actually saved 😅 i've just posted it to the site, though!

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

hi, here's my response to the evolution prompt!! https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#evolution hope u like it :D - j

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soulbox 1 year ago

I love your writing. You have such a way with words.

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manyface 1 year ago

thank you!!!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

such an evocative poem, loved the story! really interesting rhyme scheme too, kind of like a double triplet variation of terza rima

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manyface 1 year ago

thank you!! it's based off the frog princess fairytale, the slavic version of it! and the rhyme scheme is genuinely my favourite rhyme scheme to use... i think we first encountered it in "the destroyer" by robert graves, and then decided that it was just the best rhyme scheme and ours now. - j

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

posted my response to this week's prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

i cant explain why but this feels so warm !! i really like it :)

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manyface 1 year ago

oh i really liked reading this. it was beautiful and heartfelt and touching!!

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

hi! just wanted to say my Muse page has a different url now, it's https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/ (still no button :/). thank you!

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museariadne 1 year ago

lovely !! changed it just now :]

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

perfect, thanks!

maxcrunch museariadne

1 year ago

I'm new! I have finally written something :D Here is my answer to the prompt: https://maxcrunch.neocities.org/muse/may24-raveling-unraveling You can find a button here: https://maxcrunch.neocities.org/pages/linkme

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love the format, feels like somewhat of a hero's journey - the process of unravelling and rebuilding one's identity. Thank you for sharing, and congrats on your first prompt!

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museariadne 1 year ago

thank you sm for joining !! this is such a beautiful piece (i v much agree & love that i can feel a journey through it). can't wait to see your future entries :]

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percevalprintpress museariadne

1 year ago

I'm catching up and have finished this week's prompt and an older one! https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

it's incredible how much soul you can condense in shorter pieces, your last entry is very bittersweet. also in love with last week's prompt, came out really well!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings Thank you!! Most of my poems start out longer and I cut them down in editing but this is also me being obsessive about making every word have a meaning

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grlrot museariadne

1 year ago

https://grlrot.neocities.org/muse my fill!! it's short but i was really feeling the format <3

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mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

"i'd wash my hands but the blood keeps coming" yoooo. love this imagery!!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I actually really like how short it is, it's concise! also like the use of biblical references when describing the corporeal and the mundane, though that is something I personally always find beautiful

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manyface 1 year ago

ohhhh i love your writing and the imagery running through it!!! it's so potent and raw!

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

my fill for this week https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse !

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the contrast between the reverent tone of the piece and the visceral imagery scattered throughout, I think it works really well!

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mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

woah this is so cool!!! i really like your writing style :)

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grlrot 1 year ago

i love this so much, "I pray i will be less wounded in death" is SO good

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ninjacoder58 1 year ago

😎 Is this your new home page now?

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caesthoffe museariadne

1 year ago

this weeks fill, its kinda lazy but whatever: https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-15

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the idea of evolution as a conscious progress, as something you can shape and choose for yourself. powerful stuff, thank you for sharing!

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soulbox 1 year ago

Thank you for sharing this. I feel the same, sometimes I feel like I was born wrong. I hope you're able to live your life how you want to. ^^

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soulbox 1 year ago

I love your writing too!

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soulbox museariadne

1 year ago

Hello. I don't like to post my stuff but this one makes me happy inside: https://soulbox.neocities.org/muse

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soulbox 1 year ago

I might have answered the prompt wrong though.

tehuan 1 year ago

oh this is such a wonderful piece! i love the changes in focus and how you used something usually man-made in contrast with the idea of nature and its' selections, ebbs & flow. thank you for sharing :] and there's no wrong way to answer a prompt. it's an inspiration, not a test. i'm glad you got something from it 💗

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owlroost 1 year ago

Agreed that there is no wrong way to answer a prompt! I love the font choice, by the way. It's pleasing AND easy to read.

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soulbox 1 year ago

@tehuan Thank you! I love the questions and I understand that they're super abstract but sometimes my brain feels like it has a legit hard time understanding them so I feel as though I'm doing something wrong still lol. The questions get me thinking, regardless!

soulbox 1 year ago

@owlroost Thank you! The font is called Simple Plan. Easy to read is what I was looking for so I'm glad it's a success. ^^

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the parallel between human creation and human existence - evolution as a certain inevitable cyclicality. concise yet beautiful!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Love this and I think it answers the prompt

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owlroost museariadne

1 year ago

Just finished the last two prompts: evolution (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#evolve) and trace elements (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#trace). Somehow they both wound up being about growing up and nostalgia.

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

such impressive writing, very picturesque and well-crafted yet speaking to a very raw inner world. both a joy to read!

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

hellooo my prompt fill for this week is up! https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/evolution had so much fun with this.... careful with the "unleash the though process" thing, there's A Lot lmao

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grlrot 1 year ago

oh i LOVE this, the last stanza especially, and the use of slashes to make it keep going is so awesome...

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owlroost 1 year ago

That second stanza... that Resonated. May those that come after have bread pudding and tangerines (good taste).

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the bittersweet feeling of this poem - especially the wall of slashes at the end, the empty space is very powerful!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Love this!

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grlrot museariadne

1 year ago

hi!! i'd love to join, i've made a page here https://grlrot.neocities.org/writing :D

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tehuan 1 year ago

omg yay !! excited to have u :]] would you mind making ur page designated as /muse instead of /writing ? also totally okay to like... put /muse pages under /writing categories & stuff. just trying to maintain continuity as much as possible ! regardless, will add u soon !

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grlrot 1 year ago

it's done!! i had sm fun doing the last 3 prompts, excited for next week's!

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi everyone! your answers for this last week's prompt were all beautiful :] i'm excited to see what you have to say about this next one! write about evolution and devolution. how do we unravel & re-ravel? think about what histories our bodies & communities & species & worlds are made of.

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