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1 year ago

veeery soon after my last one, but here's my response to the May 6th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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vagueshape 1 year ago

ooo i love how you phrased this, it's simple but evocative. "everything of the world, and nothing of myself" is such a good line.

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caesthoffe 1 year ago

love love LOVE the structure, repetition is one of my favorite poettic devices !!!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an excellent poem, it's really punchy and gets the message across beautifully without being too forceful... well done!!

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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

back from my small hiatus, this prompt was almost perfect for me to talk about this morning's coffee https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

obsessed with the humour and lightness of this, and the detailed culinary notes. love it!

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vagueshape 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings thank you!!! i felt like writing something fun, but also complaining about that cup of coffee lol (i ended up finishing it, it somehow got better, or maybe i just got used to the taste)

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manyface 1 year ago

omg this was so funny and heartwarming to read... i'm imagining it perfectly, thank you for sharing!

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi y'all !! new prompt is up for this week :]

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manyface 1 year ago

oooh!!! this prompt is really interesting :00

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tehuan 1 year ago

i'm so glad you like it !! :]

halcybutton 1 year ago

very much enjoy the prompt this week :3

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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halcybutton museariadne

1 year ago

hi! i'd like to join :3 you can find my button at "home" and my writings at "/writings/hub"

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tehuan 1 year ago

yay, lovely !! i'll add you soon :] and the new prompt will be up soon !

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museariadne 1 year ago

actually, would you be able to tag your writing page as /muse? it's okay if it's /writings/muse if that's smth you want for organization, but i'm hoping to keep us all as cohesive as possible with our page names & all ! :]

museariadne 1 year ago

i'll wait until you update it to put ur button on the site just so i don't have to change it again n mess with it, so just lmk when it's set up ! :]

halcybutton 1 year ago

i got it updated to be muse!

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halcybutton 1 year ago

well, writings/muse haha

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

just posted my response to the April 29th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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saddogsona 1 year ago

i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]

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manyface 1 year ago

this is awesome!!!

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siph museariadne

1 year ago

finished my muse for this week, it's about friends and broken friendships https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!

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manyface 1 year ago

the language here is so beautiful and tender!

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canines museariadne

1 year ago

i posted my fill for this week, its about disability :) https://symphony.surgery/muse/mayfive

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

here's my fill for this week's prompt!! https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#asymmetry - j

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snipchu 1 year ago

"love scares me when all i have known is asymmetry" hits way too close to home. what a creative definition!!

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manyface 1 year ago

thank you!!! it's all true :')

ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this is such an impressive poem - love the contrast between the inner world of the piece and the mathematical language!

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manyface 1 year ago

@ryo thank you so much!!! i love writing mathsy poetry :D

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caesthoffe museariadne

1 year ago

new prompt filllll :3 https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-13

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D

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cassava museariadne

1 year ago

hi! i'd love to join! my button is on my site's main page, and my muse page is on my site's "map". I had a lot of fun writing for this weeks prompt ^^ https://cassava.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!

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canines 1 year ago

gosh this is so very beautiful!

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manyface 1 year ago

oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.

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saddogsona museariadne

1 year ago

i got to finishing last week's prompt :] https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse12 I also rewrote the April 1 prompt https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse9 they're both kinda rambley, but i'm trying to get back into the swing of writing

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

here's what i wrote for this week :) https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/ i'm not sure if it fits exactly but it was fun to write!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

absolutely love the format, really unsettling and beautiful!

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saddogsona 1 year ago

i adore how the formatting elevates the feeling of the piece :] I love it

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manyface 1 year ago

this is so eerie and visceral, i really liked it!

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

hello i would love to join! i made a muse page that can be found on my link page, as well as my button!

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tehuan 1 year ago

wonderful ! i'll add you later today :]

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tehuan museariadne

1 year ago

finally sat down and wrote my prompt fills for the past couple weeks i've missed, plus this new one !! :] https://tehuan.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

there is so much love and peace coming through in your poems, even when you express a certain grief. it makes for a really cozy experience as a reader, really like them!

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manyface 1 year ago

i really enjoyed your prompt fills for the wordpool week and the transition week! they were so beautiful, your writing is both delicate and strong. - j

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tehuan 1 year ago

thank you both so much !! it means a lot that you enjoyed them :]

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museariadne

1 year ago

hello lovelies ! we've got a new prompt up for this week :] i hope you enjoy: write about or use asymmetry in your writing. what is the intrigue in imbalance? maybe work with different-sized stanzas or long, long sentences followed by short ones, or think about how no two bodies are the same, nor two halves of the same body, or how the feeling of a painting shifts with where the objects sit.

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

here's my prompt fill for this week! please watch out if you read it though, it's very much about childhood trauma :00 https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#transition - therry

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

This is really moving, I love how it starts and ends with the same line

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manyface 1 year ago

@percevalprintpress thank you!!! though, the lines are slightly different! - j and therry

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

your use of enjambment is inspired, you have a way of moving readers from one line to the next that works so well. incredible poem!

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manyface 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings thank you so much!! that means a lot :> - j and therry

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canines 1 year ago

holy crappp this is so well written

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manyface 1 year ago

@symphonic thank you!!! therry wanted to write about our first transition between system hosts, we hope it resonates :0 - j

percevalprintpress museariadne

1 year ago

Just posted my prompt fill for this week! https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this is so beautiful and vulnerable, you put so well into words the aftermath of a kind of liminal grief. thank you for sharing!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings Thank you!!

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

just posted my response to the w/o April 22nd prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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chimeramanticore 1 year ago

this is really nice and bittersweet, im no poetry expert but i love the way you structured this. simple and poignant, i love it

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Really like this one!

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