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1 year ago

I'm catching up and have finished this week's prompt and an older one! https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

it's incredible how much soul you can condense in shorter pieces, your last entry is very bittersweet. also in love with last week's prompt, came out really well!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings Thank you!! Most of my poems start out longer and I cut them down in editing but this is also me being obsessive about making every word have a meaning

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grlrot museariadne

1 year ago

https://grlrot.neocities.org/muse my fill!! it's short but i was really feeling the format <3

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mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

"i'd wash my hands but the blood keeps coming" yoooo. love this imagery!!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I actually really like how short it is, it's concise! also like the use of biblical references when describing the corporeal and the mundane, though that is something I personally always find beautiful

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manyface 1 year ago

ohhhh i love your writing and the imagery running through it!!! it's so potent and raw!

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

my fill for this week https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse !

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the contrast between the reverent tone of the piece and the visceral imagery scattered throughout, I think it works really well!

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mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

woah this is so cool!!! i really like your writing style :)

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grlrot 1 year ago

i love this so much, "I pray i will be less wounded in death" is SO good

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ninjacoder58 1 year ago

😎 Is this your new home page now?

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caesthoffe museariadne

1 year ago

this weeks fill, its kinda lazy but whatever: https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-15

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the idea of evolution as a conscious progress, as something you can shape and choose for yourself. powerful stuff, thank you for sharing!

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soulbox 1 year ago

Thank you for sharing this. I feel the same, sometimes I feel like I was born wrong. I hope you're able to live your life how you want to. ^^

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soulbox 1 year ago

I love your writing too!

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soulbox museariadne

1 year ago

Hello. I don't like to post my stuff but this one makes me happy inside: https://soulbox.neocities.org/muse

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soulbox 1 year ago

I might have answered the prompt wrong though.

tehuan 1 year ago

oh this is such a wonderful piece! i love the changes in focus and how you used something usually man-made in contrast with the idea of nature and its' selections, ebbs & flow. thank you for sharing :] and there's no wrong way to answer a prompt. it's an inspiration, not a test. i'm glad you got something from it 💗

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owlroost 1 year ago

Agreed that there is no wrong way to answer a prompt! I love the font choice, by the way. It's pleasing AND easy to read.

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soulbox 1 year ago

@tehuan Thank you! I love the questions and I understand that they're super abstract but sometimes my brain feels like it has a legit hard time understanding them so I feel as though I'm doing something wrong still lol. The questions get me thinking, regardless!

soulbox 1 year ago

@owlroost Thank you! The font is called Simple Plan. Easy to read is what I was looking for so I'm glad it's a success. ^^

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the parallel between human creation and human existence - evolution as a certain inevitable cyclicality. concise yet beautiful!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Love this and I think it answers the prompt

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owlroost museariadne

1 year ago

Just finished the last two prompts: evolution (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#evolve) and trace elements (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#trace). Somehow they both wound up being about growing up and nostalgia.

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

such impressive writing, very picturesque and well-crafted yet speaking to a very raw inner world. both a joy to read!

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

hellooo my prompt fill for this week is up! https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/evolution had so much fun with this.... careful with the "unleash the though process" thing, there's A Lot lmao

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grlrot 1 year ago

oh i LOVE this, the last stanza especially, and the use of slashes to make it keep going is so awesome...

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owlroost 1 year ago

That second stanza... that Resonated. May those that come after have bread pudding and tangerines (good taste).

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the bittersweet feeling of this poem - especially the wall of slashes at the end, the empty space is very powerful!

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percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Love this!

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grlrot museariadne

1 year ago

hi!! i'd love to join, i've made a page here https://grlrot.neocities.org/writing :D

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tehuan 1 year ago

omg yay !! excited to have u :]] would you mind making ur page designated as /muse instead of /writing ? also totally okay to like... put /muse pages under /writing categories & stuff. just trying to maintain continuity as much as possible ! regardless, will add u soon !

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grlrot 1 year ago

it's done!! i had sm fun doing the last 3 prompts, excited for next week's!

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi everyone! your answers for this last week's prompt were all beautiful :] i'm excited to see what you have to say about this next one! write about evolution and devolution. how do we unravel & re-ravel? think about what histories our bodies & communities & species & worlds are made of.

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

Here's our prompt fill for the week of May 6th. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#trace - Efir

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love the use of the Shakespearean sonnet and iambic pentameter, you always build such beautiful imagery in your poems. especially like the recurring contrast between the spiritual and carnal planes!

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owlroost 1 year ago

That first line? Brilliant. Got my attention immediately because of the imagery of it. The first lines for each stanza, really, but especially the very first one.

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manyface 1 year ago

@ryo Thank you so much! I appreciate this. I actually read a lot of Baudelaire poems from The Flowers of Evil because @melxncholyman has a page dedicated to them, so this was sort of a response to what I read. Although, I am all about carnal spirituality! - Efir

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manyface 1 year ago

@owlroost Thank you so much. I really wanted to bring the image of trace elements of decaying bodies being a part of living plants. - Efir

mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

made my fill for this week + the softness prompt :) https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/trace ; https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/softness

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manyface 1 year ago

this is a really cool interpretation of the prompt!!! well done, i liked reading it a lot!!

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manyface 1 year ago

oh omg i just saw the softness prompt... it's so lovely!!! you did an amazing job!! i really feel that about my sister!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

there is so much emotional vulnerability and openness in your work - I especially like how you used the comic format in the prompt from a few weeks ago!

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

mine for this week, although i think i am a little late ^.^ https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse

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manyface 1 year ago

this is really beautiful and moving!! well done!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love the imagery you built, it's very raw yet carefully crafted!

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8ballbice 1 year ago

thank you both so much!!

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caesthoffe museariadne

1 year ago

may 6th fillllllllll :3 https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-14

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this is such a sweet poem, there is almost a kind of nostalgia in it. also love how compact it is, I think the length works really well!

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manyface 1 year ago

ohhh this is lovely!!! it makes me happy to think about!!!

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dogblog 1 year ago

Love it, relatable.

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canines museariadne

1 year ago

may 6 prompt fill! https://symphony.surgery/muse/maynine

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canines 1 year ago

real poem not just rambly prose this tiem

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the choice of formatting it as a prayer, it's a real bittersweet poem in that sense - how it speaks to a certain hope within the desperation and grief. great job!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is extremely beautiful, i love it so much. pj strikes once again with poetry that speaks to my soul - j

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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cassava museariadne

1 year ago

my response to the may 6th prompt! kind of a simple one but https://cassava.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love how you interpreted the prompt - it's such a raw feeling that you're describing. really powerful piece!

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manyface 1 year ago

i like this a lot!!! it's very powerful and visceral and i enjoy that about poetry in general, so well done :D - j

ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

veeery soon after my last one, but here's my response to the May 6th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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vagueshape 1 year ago

ooo i love how you phrased this, it's simple but evocative. "everything of the world, and nothing of myself" is such a good line.

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caesthoffe 1 year ago

love love LOVE the structure, repetition is one of my favorite poettic devices !!!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an excellent poem, it's really punchy and gets the message across beautifully without being too forceful... well done!!

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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

back from my small hiatus, this prompt was almost perfect for me to talk about this morning's coffee https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

obsessed with the humour and lightness of this, and the detailed culinary notes. love it!

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vagueshape 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings thank you!!! i felt like writing something fun, but also complaining about that cup of coffee lol (i ended up finishing it, it somehow got better, or maybe i just got used to the taste)

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manyface 1 year ago

omg this was so funny and heartwarming to read... i'm imagining it perfectly, thank you for sharing!

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museariadne

1 year ago

hi y'all !! new prompt is up for this week :]

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manyface 1 year ago

oooh!!! this prompt is really interesting :00

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tehuan 1 year ago

i'm so glad you like it !! :]

halcybutton 1 year ago

very much enjoy the prompt this week :3

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