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manyface
1 year ago
damn, your writing is so intense and clear and… has this arresting presence that demands a reader’s full attention. it’s beautiful and cool!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
such a powerful piece in its brevity, every single piece of imagery you built is so beautiful and haunting!
grlrot
1 year ago
thank you both so much!!! i often worry that I'm trying to condense too many things into really short texts so I'm really glad it worked!!!!
owlroost
1 year ago
"maybe when you're done there won't be enough of you left to feel the loss." is such a powerful line. Agreed that the brevity of this piece adds to the impact- it doesn't have to be long to hit like a truck. Well done.
tehuan
1 year ago
yay ! so happy to have you. and omg of course !! you're free to answer as many old prompts as you'd like :] the point of this club is to inspire & create community above all else !
grlrot
1 year ago
oh i adore this!! your writing is so visual and flows so beautifully! i kept getting stuck on every line and wanting to live in it.
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love the hope that comes through in this piece, the idea that absence can symbolise not only what was lost but also what can be gained in its place - at least, that's what I got from it. I especially like the final line!
manyface
1 year ago
@grlrot Thank you so much. I am sure Charlize would greatly appreciate that compliment - it's a beautiful way to phrase that sentiment, too! - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo Yes, that is what Charlize intended to write into this piece - the absence of fear, of fury, of hatred, manifesting as the love that fills the empty space. Thank you so much for your compliments! - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
this was very beautiful!! thank you for sharing and we hope it all feels a little lighter sometimes,
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
this is such a raw and honest poem, and a very well-crafted one at that. It's almost like I can feel the weight of their absence myself, great job and hope you're doing well!
manyface
1 year ago
this was very beautiful and very sad!!! i think about this sort of thing a lot too.. - charlize
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
incredible poem, and very bittersweet - it speaks to absence in the purest sense of the word, as something immaterial that lingers in the ether. I like it a lot!
manyface
1 year ago
@caesthoffe thank you so much hehe!!! i got inspired by a writing workshop i went to :3
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
absolutely adore the format, I think you captured perfectly how haunting digital ghosts can feel. really resonate with the part about 'personality in bite-sized pieces'!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo Thank you so much! We are glad you like it, J felt pretty clever about that line, ahaha! - Efir
manyface
1 year ago
thanks for sharing this with us!! it is really nice to hear that your travel anxiety no longer remains !
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
what a beautiful reflection, and a very interesting interpretation of the prompt!
manyface
1 year ago
i really liked reading this!! thank you so much for sharing, it's very bittersweet!
tehuan
1 year ago
for sure! i get it :] feel free to rejoin if you'd like to at some point ! we'd love to have you back
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
what a powerful piece - there is something really cathartic about its quiet rage. as always, hope you are doing okay!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo thank you so much!!! thank you for always reading and responding, you're awesome. and yeah i'm okay, i just have a lot of feelings!
manyface
1 year ago
ryo this is awesome. i have heard of the immortal jellyfish now! and this made me very sad, but i am happy you shared this with us!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@manyface ah, sorry about that! and thank you, I'm really glad y'all enjoyed it - I'm finding that writing about death helps me demystify it, almost. also - never not thinking about the immortal jellyfish!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
this work feels very Lovecraftian, absolutely love the description of the entity and how suddenly it breaks the calm of the world of the first few lines. can't stop thinking about 'a god without eyes', I really like this piece!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love this, it gives me this image of a tiny guy just floating off indefinitely. it's haunting and soothing at the same time!
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I really like how you format your pieces, and I love how visceral and uncompromising the writing is in this one - I think it paints the picture perfectly, your choice of words is very apt!
I really enjoyed reading it - I love your interpretation of the prompt, and it's so grotesque in a beautiful way. - Efir