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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

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muse ariadne writing club

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8ballbice museariadne

1 year ago

caught up on a few prompts, here are my entries for the past 2~! https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love how precise and visceral the descriptions of june 11th are, they make the poem feel very much live. I also adore june 17th, there is something almost brutal in how short it is and how much it leaves open to the viewer. great job!

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8ballbice 1 year ago

thank u for reading ryo, it rlly warms my heart to hear ur perspectives! ;__; <3

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canines museariadne

1 year ago

finally got caught up for the ones i missed except the current one. may 13 https://symphony.surgery/muse/may13, may 20 https://symphony.surgery/muse/may20, may 27 https://symphony.surgery/muse/may27, and june 3 https://symphony.surgery/muse/june3

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I like how despite the poems being wildly different in format and content, they still communicate a very consistent and visceral artistic voice. love the Perpetual Grilled Cheese one!

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angelogistics museariadne

1 year ago

i just did the undercurrents one ^,^ just finished my fluids final today so it felt right heh https://angelogistics.neocities.org/blog/ariadne

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love how descriptive the piece is, and how fluid and adaptable the format is too!

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museariadne

1 year ago

hiii everyone-- i updated the prompt, but completely got sidetracked before i could let you all know that i did! so here you are :]

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

a bit late but I finally posted the latest prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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lostletters 1 year ago

Really loved your characterizations of different runners. I'm a beginner!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

@lostletters thank you so much - and nice, always great to hear about more people picking up the sport!

canines 1 year ago

i just went through reading all of ur previous works and wow. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YOUR WORK IS SO GOOD!!!!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

@symphonic thank you!! that's really flattering, so glad you enjoyed my work :)

manyface museariadne

1 year ago

completed the undercurrents prompt! i wrote about actual rivers, systemhood, and being a writer! i really liked how this turned out :) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#undercurrents - j

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

very powerful imagery, I really like the concept of systemhood as this river with different currents that are interconnected yet distinct from each other (that is if I read it correctly, apologies if not)!

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manyface 1 year ago

@ryo you can read it however you want!! but thank you so much, i'm glad you got that image/idea from it :) there was a lot i was trying to say with this piece and i'm glad i could say at least some of it!

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canines 1 year ago

this is so so beautiful; your imagery is impeccable

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manyface 1 year ago

@pj thank you so much! that means a lot coming from you!!!

alicebluef0f8ff museariadne

1 year ago

adored this prompt so much that it pushed me out of my writing slump 💪 <3 https://alicebluef0f8ff.neocities.org/muse#epicenter yet another thing about complacency lol

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the recurring theme of the waves, claiming everything for themselves regardless of their history. it's a very gentle poem, I like it a lot!

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alicebluef0f8ff 1 year ago

@ryo ❤❤❤

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

1 year ago

its been like a month since i did this whdlfqsm sorry, just uploaded my prompt fill! https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/movements

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the format, I think it really gets across this sort of dichotomy of hope and despair finding their synthesis in the compromise of existence. It's quite powerful in its simplicity, I really like it!

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museariadne

1 year ago

tried to follow all club members (smth i've been meaning to do but never got around to)-- let me know if i missed you !!

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catso 1 year ago

i think you missed me

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

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cheytopia museariadne

1 year ago

Hi!! I've not been good about updating this and am asking to get removed from the club. Once I feel I can commit to answering the prompts and properly engage with others' work I will ask to rejoin if that's ok :) Still love what you're doing here!

tehuan 1 year ago

of course !! that totally makes sense :] we hope to have you back whenever you feel like you have the capacity ! 💗

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cheytopia 1 year ago

tysm <3

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

here's our response to the patterns prompt! i wrote about the cool day i had, and about how miraculous it is that we can connect our sensory processing into experiences at all. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#patterns - j

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the format of a bullet list, it's almost like there is no need to speak the connecting tissue out loud because it is so clear in its essence. lovely poem as always!

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manyface 1 year ago

thank you so much ryo!!! i'm so glad the format worked as intended hehe, being a part of muse ariadne and seeing how differently people format their work makes us wanna experiment more!! - j

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asters-asterisms museariadne

1 year ago

here is my rather meta response for this prompt wahoo https://asters-asterisms.neocities.org/home/muse/531

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I like how raw and 'unclean' the feeling you're communicating is, kind of like those thoughts that we find too ugly or shameful to share despite being very common and human. I really like the format too, and the contrast created by the differing lengths of the two paragraphs!

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

posted my response to this week's prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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manyface 1 year ago

RYO THIS IS THE COOLEST THING WE'VE SEEN FROM YOU. IT'S SO COOL WE ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

@manyface thank you so much, glad to hear y'all enjoyed it!

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

1 year ago

muse ariadne writing club

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tehuan museariadne

1 year ago

wow, i have been awful about updating the prompts. i literally have them written i just forget to post them 😭 please understand that y'all are always free to bug me on this personal account if i haven't posted the prompt by the end of monday !!

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tehuan 1 year ago

this week's prompt though !! look for patterns in chaotic & ‘random’ events, experiences, behaviors, etc. these could be in nature, in our own emotions & actions (or inactions), in the structure of a city, in a computer, in a body. do these patterns uncover an underlying order or meaning? are they coincidental?

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an awesome prompt and one of my favourite subjects :D !!!!! very excited to write on this topic. your prompts are always so wonderful! - j

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tehuan 1 year ago

you're so sweet thank you !! i'm really glad, and i hope the prompt takes you somewhere you really like !! can't wait to read it :]

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manyface museariadne

1 year ago

here's our prompt fill for the brief encounters week. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#encounter - j

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this must not have been easy to share, thank you for letting us in. I absolutely love the sentence about encounters evaporating, it feels like the calm after the storm that destroyed your shelter - it's bitter but quiet still. if it's of any help it is quite normal to have dreams that our conscious self finds disturbing or inappropriate, I hope you are healing and are doing well!

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manyface 1 year ago

@ryo thank you for reading and understanding! im actually okay right now, sometimes i just write extremely heavy stuff to exorcise it from my mind. i actually am healing so much and doing better than ever, writing stuff like this is part of the process! - j

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vagueshape museariadne

1 year ago

this week's fill: about grief and brief childhood memories https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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owlroost 1 year ago

He sounds like he was a wonderful man. I feel like I got a little of your love towards him through your writing- he might be gone, but it's okay to still care.

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manyface 1 year ago

this was extremely beautiful and heartfelt!! it makes me think of my own grandparents, my maternal grandfather died when i was 7 too... all your emotions are okay and valid and please take as long as you need to grieve! - j

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

thank you so much for sharing this with us - it's such a bittersweet piece. I remember feeling that same misplaced anger you speak of - I don't think we ever fully stop grieving but I believe it means they left an impact on you and that piece of them will be with you for as long as you live.

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ryomakesthings museariadne

1 year ago

a bit late but I posted my response to the latest prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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owlroost 1 year ago

Love the use of repetition and spacing! Adds to that feeling of glancing at someone hoping they'll accidentally meet your eyes.

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manyface 1 year ago

seconding owlroost! the use of space here is wonderful! you did a very good job of conveying that emotion of brief serendipity! - j

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