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prompt fill for this week :) been feeling kind of stagnant lately, so this one was a nice writing warm up https://shibardnek.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

I really like how you focussed on not only the graduality of distress but that of hope, as well. I appreciate how it ends on a note of self-forgiveness, the whole thing put a smile on my face. the format is also very interesting!

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shibardnek 3 months ago

thank you! when writing it i was thinking of a computer terminal, and the straightforwardness of prompt fills.

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angelogistics 3 months ago

very honest, i like how much it rings out in the darkness :o)

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manyface 3 months ago

this was really nice to read, i'm glad there was hope as well as despair and that it all felt like a process with the best intentions of the character/voice in mind, by the end of it!

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asters-asterisms museariadne

3 months ago

my prompt fill for this week 🫡 https://asters-asterisms.neocities.org/home/muse/722

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manyface 3 months ago

this is so amazing... i really loved reading through it, it's beautiful and the repetition is so powerful and poignant. so proud of you for sharing this, thank you.

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badgraph1csghost 3 months ago

i teared up reading this T-T very good work

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

what a beautiful and powerful lament. I love how you went down each line one at a time and how terribly human it all is. thank you for your art!

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museariadne

3 months ago

new prompt up !!

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melxncholyman 3 months ago

ohhhh i like this one

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ryomakesthings museariadne

3 months ago

here is my prompt fill for this week! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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manyface 3 months ago

this is such a beautiful poem! i'm glad that ikb 79 speaks to you so much, it really is a wonderful shade of blue. - j

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museariadne 3 months ago

i love this sm ! what a perfect moment to focus in on (hi sorry didn't want to change accounts to reply)

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tehuan museariadne

3 months ago

new poem for this week & filled a couple old ones !! :] https://tehuan.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

I love the new poem so much - the promise of conformity can feel comforting at times, yet for so many of us it is nothing more than a slow-acting poison. thank you for putting it into words so beautifully, the love and hope in this piece are inspiring!

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tehuan 3 months ago

you're so sweet, thank you so much! i defiinitiely think the way we ask ourselves to conform can sometimes be euphoric, but also really harmful sometimes, n it was nice to acknowledge that while still showing respect for all the collected knowledge on how to pass, etc

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flowerinbinary 3 months ago

"on lou sullivan’s advice" is so so beautiful and important... i like your rhymes

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sunmiflowers 3 months ago

" ...I should try to want like a man does / without pause or question." hits hard!!!

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alicebluef0f8ff 3 months ago

incredibly resonating. its so frustrating when you finally discover who you are, yet instead of being able to bask in the joy of that you have to constantly keep fighting what feels like a losing battle of conformity. oh can't believe how strange it is to be anything at all...

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alicebluef0f8ff 3 months ago

oh, and it goes without saying, but you're a great writer and i always love reading your prompts <3

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tehuan 3 months ago

you guys are all so sweet, ty kindly !! i'm really glad the poem resonates with you guys. it's suchhh a frustrating feeling to be forced into conformity and i think it's once we all feel at some point or another

vagueshape museariadne

3 months ago

this week's fill! i love the imagery of the oroborous (the serpent that eats his tail) and decided to write a little poem. I'm not great with rhyming so I think it sounds a little clunky, but I would love to turn this one into a song once day, maybe with the last stanza as the chorus! https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

I like this, in a sense it feels like an ode to life itself in all its facets through the cyclicality of the oroborous. I think your passion for its imagery shines through very clearly!

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manyface 3 months ago

this made me smile a lot as i read it. i like the ouroboros too and this poem felt so earnestly joyful and appreciative of the cyclicality of the cosmos!

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caesthoffe 3 months ago

loveeee your choice of language, feels very flowy and powerful at the same time :))

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tehuan 3 months ago

oh this is so gorgeous n i Def feel like it could make such a cool song !!

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caesthoffe museariadne

3 months ago

did my prompt for the week !! its a little unconventional, but i ended up combining two prompts, because i hadnt written anything for weeek 23 and when i saw what week 24 was for i immediately was inspired :>> so enjoy https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-23&24

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tehuan 3 months ago

AHH this is so cool & i love that you fucked around with two prompts at once !! awesome move :]

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

that last line hits hard, I love your version of it. I get the sense of an ember of hope burning through the desperation and exhaustion. Great work!

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manyface 3 months ago

this is so awesome, i really liked it. it's so powerful and heavy and tender all at once!

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manyface museariadne

3 months ago

i did this week's prompt! i translated a poem from russian :) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#translation - j

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tehuan 3 months ago

oh this is so beautiful, ty for sharing

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

thank you for sharing this with us, it's a very powerful and evocative poem - can't speak for the original piece but it's a great translation, I'm sure the former is just as biting!

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manyface 3 months ago

@xalli @ryo thank you so much!! that means a lot to me! translating stuff is fun, especially when you get to play with it a little! :D

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caesthoffe 3 months ago

translation is a skill that i respect so much, amazing job :))

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manyface 3 months ago

@caesthoffe thank you so much!! after writing, i was delighted to learn that nobody has ever translated this particular poem before i did (and if they did, it's not online) - j

museariadne

3 months ago

new prompt posted for this week !!

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caesthoffe 3 months ago

oh my GODDD im so excited for this one

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ryomakesthings museariadne

3 months ago

just posted the latest prompt - I really like how this one came out, felt like experimenting with new formats. https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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vagueshape 3 months ago

this was so fun to read!!! i really like the formatting of this one, i think its so unique

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manyface 3 months ago

this was so cute and cool!! we liked this a lot, you're so creative with all the different formats you use! - j and shades

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shibardnek museariadne

3 months ago

hi!! i've finally made my muse page and i'd love to join your club :) muse page can be found here https://shibardnek.neocities.org/muse and i have a button on my main page here https://shibardnek.neocities.org/main

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tehuan 3 months ago

added !! :]

manyface museariadne

3 months ago

i did the prompt for this week (stones) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#stones and j did the prompt of the week of march 25th (second person) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#you. - shades

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

July 8th is probably one of my favourite poems I've seen from you guys - so, so very powerful and I adore the direction in which you took the prompt. also love the format of march 25th!

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manyface 3 months ago

thank you so much, ryo. that means a lot to me - i am very glad my words resonated with you. - shades

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percevalprintpress museariadne

3 months ago

I've finally starting writing again! Mine for this week is short: a haiku https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 3 months ago

I love haikus! I really like how you interpreted the prompt, it's a very unique concept and you put it very well - I can almost hear a clock ticking faintly in the distance. really like it!

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manyface 3 months ago

this is great, thank you so much for sharing. i like how it has a twist despite being so concise. it's powerful. - shades

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percevalprintpress 3 months ago

thank you!! yes I always try to challenge myself to end a haiku with a new meaning/twist

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ryomakesthings museariadne

3 months ago

finally answered the prompt from last week - it's rather short but it felt right in the moment. https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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manyface 3 months ago

ryo, this is beautiful and very potent. it gives me the impression of an ancient message carved into stone, lost to eternity and found millennia later. - shades

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museariadne

4 months ago

new prompt up !! :] write about stones as keepers of stories and witnesses to history. what silent wisdom do things like stones have, with their enduring presence?

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owlroost museariadne

4 months ago

Finished this week's prompt- the timing of this one lined up a little too well with life events. It helped to write it down. https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#absence

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

beautifully written, and horribly gut-wrenching. your writing is always extremely impressive, and I can only wish you the absolute best for all the life you do get to live - thank you for choosing to spend a little bit of that time sharing your art with us, truly.

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owlroost 4 months ago

Thankfully, I get more than ten years to live if this diagnosis gets confirmed. I just won't be able to work or live independently for as long as I'd hoped for.

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manyface 4 months ago

your writing is so beautiful and moving, and absolutely devastating. the hope that runs through it is so powerful despite how terrible the circumstances are. please keep that hope alive, and stay safe. thank you for sharing your writing! - j

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pixelglade 4 months ago

The part where you're looking up at your body at thinking it isn't you yet it's still responsible for much of what you experience in life is very relatable and saddening to me as someone with chronic illnesses. Thanks for sharing and I hope you keep doing your best with the body you've got.

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moondvsted museariadne

4 months ago

finally something sparked enough thoughts for me to get something down ^_^ https://moondvsted.neocities.org/writing/muse/2024-07-01.txt

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

really sorry for your loss. I appreciate you writing about the transition period where the wound is healing but the scar is still staring back, I think you did it and your pet justice. hope you're okay!

manyface 4 months ago

i'm really sorry for your loss! as ryo said, your writing conveys that transitive grieving period very well, and i'm tearing up from reading it. please take care of yourself! - j

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