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ryomakesthings
1 year ago
absolutely love the vocabulary you used and the imagery you built with it, great piece!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
first of all, thank you for your vulnerability - such a sweet and thoughtful piece! I especially like the line about making childhood memories as an adult, and 'I felt my youth'. beautiful work, hope you're okay!
chimeramanticore
1 year ago
@ryomakesthings thank you! i cant claim one good night fixed me lol but i think it refreshed me/put me on the right track. hoping things look up from here :]
caesthoffe
1 year ago
god that last line hits hard, and the yearning for the comfort of the past is so relatable. love this entry.
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
God, this made me cry. thank you for sharing with us, it's a beautiful, bittersweet piece. I relate to those inner contradictions and struggling with what they have to say about our essence. I hope you're alright!
manyface
1 year ago
thank you ryo, i'm okay! i write this kind of thing to exorcise it from my mind. i'm sorry it made you cry - i hope you're okay too! and thank you again. it was my dad's birthday on monday, and i wrote him a poem where i told him i love him without using those words. so he knows, at least.
chimeramanticore
1 year ago
this was awful to read in the best possible way. i cant say ive done anything quite as intense but i know those conflicted feelings and urges all too well. i hope everything is okay, or that things are getting easier
manyface
1 year ago
@chimeramanticore thank you for reading, and i'm sorry you relate - it's tough! everything is alright and things are much easier than they were 4 years ago! i really am glad that i can talk to him again...
tehuan
1 year ago
yeah of course! i totally understand. i hope you're able to return at some point :]
manyface
1 year ago
this is really good, i hope being in that place helps you feel more connected to your grandmother. please take care of yourself!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@manyface thank you! I am doing well now, just been very interested in reflecting on mortality lately x
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love how precise and visceral the descriptions of june 11th are, they make the poem feel very much live. I also adore june 17th, there is something almost brutal in how short it is and how much it leaves open to the viewer. great job!
8ballbice
1 year ago
thank u for reading ryo, it rlly warms my heart to hear ur perspectives! ;__; <3
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I like how despite the poems being wildly different in format and content, they still communicate a very consistent and visceral artistic voice. love the Perpetual Grilled Cheese one!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
love how descriptive the piece is, and how fluid and adaptable the format is too!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@lostletters thank you so much - and nice, always great to hear about more people picking up the sport!
canines
1 year ago
i just went through reading all of ur previous works and wow. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YOUR WORK IS SO GOOD!!!!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
@symphonic thank you!! that's really flattering, so glad you enjoyed my work :)
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
very powerful imagery, I really like the concept of systemhood as this river with different currents that are interconnected yet distinct from each other (that is if I read it correctly, apologies if not)!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo you can read it however you want!! but thank you so much, i'm glad you got that image/idea from it :) there was a lot i was trying to say with this piece and i'm glad i could say at least some of it!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I really like the format, I think it really gets across this sort of dichotomy of hope and despair finding their synthesis in the compromise of existence. It's quite powerful in its simplicity, I really like it!
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I love this, it gives me this image of a tiny guy just floating off indefinitely. it's haunting and soothing at the same time!