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completed the undercurrents prompt! i wrote about actual rivers, systemhood, and being a writer! i really liked how this turned out :) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#undercurrents - j

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

very powerful imagery, I really like the concept of systemhood as this river with different currents that are interconnected yet distinct from each other (that is if I read it correctly, apologies if not)!

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manyface 4 months ago

@ryo you can read it however you want!! but thank you so much, i'm glad you got that image/idea from it :) there was a lot i was trying to say with this piece and i'm glad i could say at least some of it!

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symphonic 4 months ago

this is so so beautiful; your imagery is impeccable

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manyface 4 months ago

@pj thank you so much! that means a lot coming from you!!!

alicebluef0f8ff museariadne

4 months ago

adored this prompt so much that it pushed me out of my writing slump 💪 <3 https://alicebluef0f8ff.neocities.org/muse#epicenter yet another thing about complacency lol

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

I really like the recurring theme of the waves, claiming everything for themselves regardless of their history. it's a very gentle poem, I like it a lot!

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alicebluef0f8ff 4 months ago

@ryo ❤❤❤

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

4 months ago

its been like a month since i did this whdlfqsm sorry, just uploaded my prompt fill! https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/movements

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

I really like the format, I think it really gets across this sort of dichotomy of hope and despair finding their synthesis in the compromise of existence. It's quite powerful in its simplicity, I really like it!

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museariadne

4 months ago

tried to follow all club members (smth i've been meaning to do but never got around to)-- let me know if i missed you !!

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catso 4 months ago

i think you missed me

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

4 months ago

prompts.html

muse ariadne writing club

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cheytopia museariadne

4 months ago

Hi!! I've not been good about updating this and am asking to get removed from the club. Once I feel I can commit to answering the prompts and properly engage with others' work I will ask to rejoin if that's ok :) Still love what you're doing here!

tehuan 4 months ago

of course !! that totally makes sense :] we hope to have you back whenever you feel like you have the capacity ! 💗

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cheytopia 4 months ago

tysm <3

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catso museariadne

4 months ago

hi there! i'd love to be a part of this club! (i have written and linked back @ https://catso.neocities.org/muse/) (you can find my own button on https://catso.neocities.org/) thank you!

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museariadne 4 months ago

of course !! i'll add you right now :]

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manyface museariadne

4 months ago

here's our response to the patterns prompt! i wrote about the cool day i had, and about how miraculous it is that we can connect our sensory processing into experiences at all. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#patterns - j

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

I love the format of a bullet list, it's almost like there is no need to speak the connecting tissue out loud because it is so clear in its essence. lovely poem as always!

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manyface 4 months ago

thank you so much ryo!!! i'm so glad the format worked as intended hehe, being a part of muse ariadne and seeing how differently people format their work makes us wanna experiment more!! - j

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asters-asterisms museariadne

4 months ago

here is my rather meta response for this prompt wahoo https://asters-asterisms.neocities.org/home/muse/531

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

I like how raw and 'unclean' the feeling you're communicating is, kind of like those thoughts that we find too ugly or shameful to share despite being very common and human. I really like the format too, and the contrast created by the differing lengths of the two paragraphs!

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ryomakesthings museariadne

4 months ago

posted my response to this week's prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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manyface 4 months ago

RYO THIS IS THE COOLEST THING WE'VE SEEN FROM YOU. IT'S SO COOL WE ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

@manyface thank you so much, glad to hear y'all enjoyed it!

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museariadne updated muse ariadne writing club

4 months ago

muse ariadne writing club

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tehuan museariadne

4 months ago

wow, i have been awful about updating the prompts. i literally have them written i just forget to post them 😭 please understand that y'all are always free to bug me on this personal account if i haven't posted the prompt by the end of monday !!

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tehuan 4 months ago

this week's prompt though !! look for patterns in chaotic & ‘random’ events, experiences, behaviors, etc. these could be in nature, in our own emotions & actions (or inactions), in the structure of a city, in a computer, in a body. do these patterns uncover an underlying order or meaning? are they coincidental?

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manyface 4 months ago

this is an awesome prompt and one of my favourite subjects :D !!!!! very excited to write on this topic. your prompts are always so wonderful! - j

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tehuan 4 months ago

you're so sweet thank you !! i'm really glad, and i hope the prompt takes you somewhere you really like !! can't wait to read it :]

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manyface museariadne

4 months ago

here's our prompt fill for the brief encounters week. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#encounter - j

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

this must not have been easy to share, thank you for letting us in. I absolutely love the sentence about encounters evaporating, it feels like the calm after the storm that destroyed your shelter - it's bitter but quiet still. if it's of any help it is quite normal to have dreams that our conscious self finds disturbing or inappropriate, I hope you are healing and are doing well!

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manyface 4 months ago

@ryo thank you for reading and understanding! im actually okay right now, sometimes i just write extremely heavy stuff to exorcise it from my mind. i actually am healing so much and doing better than ever, writing stuff like this is part of the process! - j

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vagueshape museariadne

4 months ago

this week's fill: about grief and brief childhood memories https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse

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owlroost 4 months ago

He sounds like he was a wonderful man. I feel like I got a little of your love towards him through your writing- he might be gone, but it's okay to still care.

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manyface 4 months ago

this was extremely beautiful and heartfelt!! it makes me think of my own grandparents, my maternal grandfather died when i was 7 too... all your emotions are okay and valid and please take as long as you need to grieve! - j

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

thank you so much for sharing this with us - it's such a bittersweet piece. I remember feeling that same misplaced anger you speak of - I don't think we ever fully stop grieving but I believe it means they left an impact on you and that piece of them will be with you for as long as you live.

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ryomakesthings museariadne

4 months ago

a bit late but I posted my response to the latest prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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owlroost 4 months ago

Love the use of repetition and spacing! Adds to that feeling of glancing at someone hoping they'll accidentally meet your eyes.

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manyface 4 months ago

seconding owlroost! the use of space here is wonderful! you did a very good job of conveying that emotion of brief serendipity! - j

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8ballbice museariadne

4 months ago

my fill for this weeks prompt,! https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

I absolutely love your vocabulary and the imagery you paint through it, very evocative!

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manyface 4 months ago

wow, this was so cool and visceral and interesting to read... your word choices are sublime!!! - j

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owlroost museariadne

4 months ago

Responded to the brief encounters prompt- fair warning that this is a heavy one, but it's a story I keep telling because it gives me hope that it happened at all. There are some good people out there, folks! https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#monkey

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falconiforme 4 months ago

That was a lovely story, thank you for sharing it :)

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

this is such a well-written yet raw piece - I definitely recognise the long-gone pattern of intrusive thoughts. I also really appreciate the advice at the beginning and at the end, it's all so very thoughtful. thank you so much for sharing!

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manyface 4 months ago

this is a really good piece, and i am really happy that you had gabriel in your life for that brief encounter. we've struggled with suicidality too, your piece really captures that thought pattern well. my sister's bf is called gabriel, maybe good people are just called that... - j

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sneekrealm 4 months ago

ok this made me cry (tho ive fortunately not had to deal w such thoughts, but simply seem to be slipping into some rough patch these past couple days that im tryin to handle ok enough)

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museariadne

4 months ago

hi everyone! i'm SO sorry for not posting a prompt this monday! i tried to, but our wifi has been horrible and it seems like it never actually saved 😅 i've just posted it to the site, though!

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manyface museariadne

4 months ago

hi, here's my response to the evolution prompt!! https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#evolution hope u like it :D - j

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soulbox 4 months ago

I love your writing. You have such a way with words.

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manyface 4 months ago

thank you!!!

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ryomakesthings 4 months ago

such an evocative poem, loved the story! really interesting rhyme scheme too, kind of like a double triplet variation of terza rima

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manyface 4 months ago

thank you!! it's based off the frog princess fairytale, the slavic version of it! and the rhyme scheme is genuinely my favourite rhyme scheme to use... i think we first encountered it in "the destroyer" by robert graves, and then decided that it was just the best rhyme scheme and ours now. - j

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ryomakesthings museariadne

4 months ago

posted my response to this week's prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/

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mism4tchedsocks 4 months ago

i cant explain why but this feels so warm !! i really like it :)

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manyface 4 months ago

oh i really liked reading this. it was beautiful and heartfelt and touching!!

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