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hi! i'd love to join! my button is on my site's main page, and my muse page is on my site's "map". I had a lot of fun writing for this weeks prompt ^^ https://cassava.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 6 months ago

I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!

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symphonic 6 months ago

gosh this is so very beautiful!

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manyface 6 months ago

oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.

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the-chavez-zone museariadne

6 months ago

i got to finishing last week's prompt :] https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse12 I also rewrote the April 1 prompt https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse9 they're both kinda rambley, but i'm trying to get back into the swing of writing

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ryomakesthings 6 months ago

these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!

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mism4tchedsocks museariadne

6 months ago

here's what i wrote for this week :) https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/ i'm not sure if it fits exactly but it was fun to write!

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ryomakesthings 6 months ago

absolutely love the format, really unsettling and beautiful!

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the-chavez-zone 6 months ago

i adore how the formatting elevates the feeling of the piece :] I love it

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manyface 6 months ago

this is so eerie and visceral, i really liked it!

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8ballbice museariadne

6 months ago

hello i would love to join! i made a muse page that can be found on my link page, as well as my button!

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tehuan 6 months ago

wonderful ! i'll add you later today :]

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tehuan museariadne

6 months ago

finally sat down and wrote my prompt fills for the past couple weeks i've missed, plus this new one !! :] https://tehuan.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 6 months ago

there is so much love and peace coming through in your poems, even when you express a certain grief. it makes for a really cozy experience as a reader, really like them!

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manyface 6 months ago

i really enjoyed your prompt fills for the wordpool week and the transition week! they were so beautiful, your writing is both delicate and strong. - j

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tehuan 6 months ago

thank you both so much !! it means a lot that you enjoyed them :]

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museariadne

6 months ago

hello lovelies ! we've got a new prompt up for this week :] i hope you enjoy: write about or use asymmetry in your writing. what is the intrigue in imbalance? maybe work with different-sized stanzas or long, long sentences followed by short ones, or think about how no two bodies are the same, nor two halves of the same body, or how the feeling of a painting shifts with where the objects sit.

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manyface museariadne

6 months ago

here's my prompt fill for this week! please watch out if you read it though, it's very much about childhood trauma :00 https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#transition - therry

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percevalprintpress 6 months ago

This is really moving, I love how it starts and ends with the same line

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manyface 6 months ago

@percevalprintpress thank you!!! though, the lines are slightly different! - j and therry

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ryomakesthings 6 months ago

your use of enjambment is inspired, you have a way of moving readers from one line to the next that works so well. incredible poem!

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manyface 6 months ago

@ryomakesthings thank you so much!! that means a lot :> - j and therry

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symphonic 6 months ago

holy crappp this is so well written

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manyface 6 months ago

@symphonic thank you!!! therry wanted to write about our first transition between system hosts, we hope it resonates :0 - j

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percevalprintpress museariadne

7 months ago

Just posted my prompt fill for this week! https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 6 months ago

this is so beautiful and vulnerable, you put so well into words the aftermath of a kind of liminal grief. thank you for sharing!

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percevalprintpress 6 months ago

@ryomakesthings Thank you!!

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ryomakesthings museariadne

7 months ago

just posted my response to the w/o April 22nd prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse

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chimeramanticore 7 months ago

this is really nice and bittersweet, im no poetry expert but i love the way you structured this. simple and poignant, i love it

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percevalprintpress 7 months ago

Really like this one!

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chimeramanticore museariadne

7 months ago

after lurking for a few weeks, i've written my first prompt! i was waiting for a prompt to resonate with me, and this one definitely did (maybe a little too much. it's kinda.. messy) hope it's alright! https://chimeramanticore.neocities.org/muse

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manyface 7 months ago

this is really great, i feel for you. thank you for sharing your words and experiences!

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

this is such a beautiful thought - we don't talk enough about how non-linear life can be at times. congratulations on your first piece!

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symphonic museariadne

7 months ago

hello i have added my response to this week's prompt, heed the tw for implied trauma though :) https://symphony.surgery/muse/april25

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manyface 7 months ago

this is remarkable. your writing is remarkable.

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

this is such a strong and vulnerable piece of writing - thank you so much for sharing it with us, this is beyond beautiful!

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caesthoffe museariadne

7 months ago

i added my entry for this weeks! https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-12

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

I think you encapsulated perfectly the idea of adulthood as compromise, there is something so beautiful about how you used such a small moment in daily life to communicate a strong concept!

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owlroost museariadne

7 months ago

It's a week late, but here's my piece for the word pool prompt! https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#word-pool

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

absolutely love the imagery you built, the visual element was a really nice touch!

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asters-asterisms 7 months ago

ough that is DELECTABLE, very beautiful

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manyface 7 months ago

this is so lovely and just. immaculate. it's a wonderful piece!!

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symphonic 7 months ago

oh wow. this is SO good

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percevalprintpress 6 months ago

Wow this is really beautiful!!

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museariadne

7 months ago

hey y'all ! i'm so sorry i got behind on this stuff ! it's been really chaotic in my life lately... anyway, please accept this belated prompt ! explore on the softness & blurring of edges—dawn/dusk, the place between sleep and wakefulness, transitions from youthfulness to adulthood and adulthood to old age. what do those borders & changes feel like, look like, smell like?

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manyface museariadne

7 months ago

https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#wordpool here's my response to the april 15th week prompt!!

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

what a beautiful poem, love how it's tender yet dynamic!

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manyface 7 months ago

thank you so much !!!

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percevalprintpress 7 months ago

Really love this!!!

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manyface 7 months ago

@percevalprintpress thank you so much!! it's all true!

melxncholyman museariadne

7 months ago

posted this week's prompt! had fun with anagrams https://melxncholyman.neocities.org/muse

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

such a fun idea, and a very creative way to interpret the prompt!

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manyface 7 months ago

yoooo that's amazing!!!!! very creative!!

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percevalprintpress museariadne

7 months ago

Posted my prompt fill for this week. I tried writing a sonnet! https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/

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ryomakesthings 7 months ago

love the sonnet structure and the story - they mesh really well together!

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manyface 7 months ago

i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)

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