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actually, would you be able to tag your writing page as /muse? it's okay if it's /writings/muse if that's smth you want for organization, but i'm hoping to keep us all as cohesive as possible with our page names & all ! :]
i'll wait until you update it to put ur button on the site just so i don't have to change it again n mess with it, so just lmk when it's set up ! :]
i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]
I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!
this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer
beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!
"love scares me when all i have known is asymmetry" hits way too close to home. what a creative definition!!
this is such an impressive poem - love the contrast between the inner world of the piece and the mathematical language!
I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!
this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D
I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!
oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.
these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!
i adore how the formatting elevates the feeling of the piece :] I love it
there is so much love and peace coming through in your poems, even when you express a certain grief. it makes for a really cozy experience as a reader, really like them!
i really enjoyed your prompt fills for the wordpool week and the transition week! they were so beautiful, your writing is both delicate and strong. - j
This is really moving, I love how it starts and ends with the same line
@percevalprintpress thank you!!! though, the lines are slightly different! - j and therry
your use of enjambment is inspired, you have a way of moving readers from one line to the next that works so well. incredible poem!
@symphonic thank you!!! therry wanted to write about our first transition between system hosts, we hope it resonates :0 - j
this is so beautiful and vulnerable, you put so well into words the aftermath of a kind of liminal grief. thank you for sharing!
this is really nice and bittersweet, im no poetry expert but i love the way you structured this. simple and poignant, i love it
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obsessed with the humour and lightness of this, and the detailed culinary notes. love it!
@ryomakesthings thank you!!! i felt like writing something fun, but also complaining about that cup of coffee lol (i ended up finishing it, it somehow got better, or maybe i just got used to the taste)
omg this was so funny and heartwarming to read... i'm imagining it perfectly, thank you for sharing!