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bugandmomo updated bug and momo

3 years ago

bug and momo

theburied

3 years ago

Sorry for that huge tangent 🧍🧍🧍🧍

theburied 3 years ago

Neocities needs a better commenting system because I literally cannot reply to any of yall on comments. This BLOWS.

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theburied

3 years ago

Got recent advice from a friend that maybe I shouldn't redo mp/ss. I'm not gonna listen because 90% of the advice was take what I dont like about what I did with this comic and fix it for future comics. I don't intend to make another comic series for while. And I'd rather I tell this story and be more satisfied than not by the end of it. Mp/Ss was structured in a way that, at first, seemed ideal. I didn't intend to--

theburied 3 years ago

(1) --pour so much of my feelings/trauma/struggles into Tyler. But now that I wanted to tell a bigger story than it started with, I feel like I could do so much more. So much was cut out for the sake of keeping each chapter 24 pages long with 3(minimum) parts to them. These are important story beats I tossed for the layout and I feel as though I could tell it so much better if I gave myself more liberty.

theburied 3 years ago

(2) A lot of things have changed with the characters, namely Mason/Tyler/Poppy/Gales dynamic and it doesn't show too well with how the story is currently.

theburied 3 years ago

On another note I'm scared of the rerun being vaguely popular and Mason getting attention because he's a freak that I based off people who hurt me. I don't mind people liking this iteration of him because he wasn't completely intended that way at first but second iteration it'll be more obvious and I'm scared people will like him and try to dismiss his actions cause hes fucking silly or whatever.

theburied 3 years ago

ONE LAST NOTE: I keep flipflopping between Poppy/Gale being a DID system because I worry I'm accidentally portraying them weirdly/its offensive/playing into stereotypes a little bit. In the second iteration I hope to have picked whether or not I want to and make it a lot more clear to the audience that Poppy/Gale are a system w/ Poppy being an alter that's just fronting all the time now.

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theburied 3 years ago

Poppy/Gale being a system is a funny one cause like Tyler's autism I didn't intend it to be that way but as more time went on it just kind of grew on accident. In my head Poppy and Gale felt like different people so I literally made them separate entities/consciousnesses. They're kinda Silly.

theburied 3 years ago

One more I promise: I have put a lot of time and research into Gale/Poppy's system, and while I didn't take any notes, I did figure out what kind of alter Poppy is (i did not write it down i am so sorry but i'll be sure to return to researching and educating myself). I do want this to be canon I'm just nervous about making it weird on accident.

deadgirlpoetry 3 years ago

i cant wait to see where this will go and im sure youll do a good job, tell the story YOU want

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owlroost 3 years ago

If you need any input on Poppy and Gale, I used to be plural and can point you at resources or answer what questions I can. I can probably also find other systems willing to be in contact and help out with questions.

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theburied

3 years ago

199 is out!

lifeinthe4thdimension updated 4th dimensional

3 years ago

4th dimensional

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theburied

3 years ago

Planning on making mp/ss2 strictly lineart as to ease the workload, this will give me a lot more creative freedoms. :3 Reading manga makes me a little crazy I think because i'll be adding covers+backs like it was an actual book. what if i was silly

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owlroost 3 years ago

You could print it out and make an actual bound copy for yourself! I know a really good tutorial or two if you want.

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theburied 3 years ago

@owlcollective A really sweet offer but I don't think I'd print out mp/ss. It'd be a lot of pages and its right here inside my laptop/website anyways >_> + I don't feel too passionate about it to have a physical copy, I'm not a very Items kind of person. But thank you for the offer anyhow!!!! <3

theburied

3 years ago

can't wait for mp/ss2 because im going to be so evil.

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lasvegasadventure updated Las Vegas Adventure

3 years ago