I love your poem, 'Mayashiro'. It was full of a story that it's difficult to construct, but comprehensible from an inside perpective? I'm probably not making sense, but it was very beautiful. My favorite lines were: Stand still, take the kill; Look alive, learn to die, unsatisfied; and this wow ;We're melting in frozen names, and half-hearted breaths Like moths being drawn flames, we will not forget I won't forget
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I love your poem, 'Mayashiro'. It was full of a story that it's difficult to construct, but comprehensible from an inside perpective? I'm probably not making sense, but it was very beautiful. My favorite lines were: Stand still, take the kill; Look alive, learn to die, unsatisfied; and this wow ;We're melting in frozen names, and half-hearted breaths Like moths being drawn flames, we will not forget I won't forget
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