this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer

beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!

"love scares me when all i have known is asymmetry" hits way too close to home. what a creative definition!!

thank you!!! it's all true :')

this is such an impressive poem - love the contrast between the inner world of the piece and the mathematical language!

@ryo thank you so much!!! i love writing mathsy poetry :D

I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!

this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D

I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!

gosh this is so very beautiful!

oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.

these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!

absolutely love the format, really unsettling and beautiful!

i adore how the formatting elevates the feeling of the piece :] I love it

this is so eerie and visceral, i really liked it!

wonderful ! i'll add you later today :]

there is so much love and peace coming through in your poems, even when you express a certain grief. it makes for a really cozy experience as a reader, really like them!

i really enjoyed your prompt fills for the wordpool week and the transition week! they were so beautiful, your writing is both delicate and strong. - j

thank you both so much !! it means a lot that you enjoyed them :]