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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

this is such a sweet poem, there is almost a kind of nostalgia in it. also love how compact it is, I think the length works really well!

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manyface 1 year ago

ohhh this is lovely!!! it makes me happy to think about!!!

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dogblog 1 year ago

Love it, relatable.

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canines 1 year ago

real poem not just rambly prose this tiem

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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the choice of formatting it as a prayer, it's a real bittersweet poem in that sense - how it speaks to a certain hope within the desperation and grief. great job!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is extremely beautiful, i love it so much. pj strikes once again with poetry that speaks to my soul - j

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my response to the may 6th prompt! kind of a simple one but https://cassava.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love how you interpreted the prompt - it's such a raw feeling that you're describing. really powerful piece!

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manyface 1 year ago

i like this a lot!!! it's very powerful and visceral and i enjoy that about poetry in general, so well done :D - j

veeery soon after my last one, but here's my response to the May 6th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse
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vagueshape 1 year ago

ooo i love how you phrased this, it's simple but evocative. "everything of the world, and nothing of myself" is such a good line.

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caesthoffe 1 year ago

love love LOVE the structure, repetition is one of my favorite poettic devices !!!

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manyface 1 year ago

this is an excellent poem, it's really punchy and gets the message across beautifully without being too forceful... well done!!

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back from my small hiatus, this prompt was almost perfect for me to talk about this morning's coffee https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

obsessed with the humour and lightness of this, and the detailed culinary notes. love it!

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vagueshape 1 year ago

@ryomakesthings thank you!!! i felt like writing something fun, but also complaining about that cup of coffee lol (i ended up finishing it, it somehow got better, or maybe i just got used to the taste)

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manyface 1 year ago

omg this was so funny and heartwarming to read... i'm imagining it perfectly, thank you for sharing!

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hi y'all !! new prompt is up for this week :]
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manyface 1 year ago

oooh!!! this prompt is really interesting :00

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tehuan 1 year ago

i'm so glad you like it !! :]

halcybutton 1 year ago

very much enjoy the prompt this week :3

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just posted my response to the April 29th prompt! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/muse
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the-chavez-zone 1 year ago

i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]

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manyface 1 year ago

this is awesome!!!

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finished my muse for this week, it's about friends and broken friendships https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/
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ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!

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manyface 1 year ago

the language here is so beautiful and tender!

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