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https://grlrot.neocities.org/muse my fill!! it's short but i was really feeling the format <3
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mism4tchedsocks's avatar mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

"i'd wash my hands but the blood keeps coming" yoooo. love this imagery!!

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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I actually really like how short it is, it's concise! also like the use of biblical references when describing the corporeal and the mundane, though that is something I personally always find beautiful

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manyface's avatar manyface 1 year ago

ohhhh i love your writing and the imagery running through it!!! it's so potent and raw!

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my fill for this week https://8ballbice.neocities.org/muse !
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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the contrast between the reverent tone of the piece and the visceral imagery scattered throughout, I think it works really well!

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mism4tchedsocks's avatar mism4tchedsocks 1 year ago

woah this is so cool!!! i really like your writing style :)

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grlrot's avatar grlrot 1 year ago

i love this so much, "I pray i will be less wounded in death" is SO good

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ninjacoder58's avatar ninjacoder58 1 year ago

😎 Is this your new home page now?

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this weeks fill, its kinda lazy but whatever: https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-15
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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I really like the idea of evolution as a conscious progress, as something you can shape and choose for yourself. powerful stuff, thank you for sharing!

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soulbox's avatar soulbox 1 year ago

Thank you for sharing this. I feel the same, sometimes I feel like I was born wrong. I hope you're able to live your life how you want to. ^^

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soulbox's avatar soulbox 1 year ago

I love your writing too!

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Hello. I don't like to post my stuff but this one makes me happy inside: https://soulbox.neocities.org/muse
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soulbox's avatar soulbox 1 year ago

I might have answered the prompt wrong though.

tehuan's avatar tehuan 1 year ago

oh this is such a wonderful piece! i love the changes in focus and how you used something usually man-made in contrast with the idea of nature and its' selections, ebbs & flow. thank you for sharing :] and there's no wrong way to answer a prompt. it's an inspiration, not a test. i'm glad you got something from it πŸ’—

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owlroost's avatar owlroost 1 year ago

Agreed that there is no wrong way to answer a prompt! I love the font choice, by the way. It's pleasing AND easy to read.

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soulbox's avatar soulbox 1 year ago

@tehuan Thank you! I love the questions and I understand that they're super abstract but sometimes my brain feels like it has a legit hard time understanding them so I feel as though I'm doing something wrong still lol. The questions get me thinking, regardless!

soulbox's avatar soulbox 1 year ago

@owlroost Thank you! The font is called Simple Plan. Easy to read is what I was looking for so I'm glad it's a success. ^^

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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the parallel between human creation and human existence - evolution as a certain inevitable cyclicality. concise yet beautiful!

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percevalprintpress's avatar percevalprintpress 1 year ago

Love this and I think it answers the prompt

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Just finished the last two prompts: evolution (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#evolve) and trace elements (https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#trace). Somehow they both wound up being about growing up and nostalgia.
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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

such impressive writing, very picturesque and well-crafted yet speaking to a very raw inner world. both a joy to read!

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hellooo my prompt fill for this week is up! https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/evolution had so much fun with this.... careful with the "unleash the though process" thing, there's A Lot lmao
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grlrot's avatar grlrot 1 year ago

oh i LOVE this, the last stanza especially, and the use of slashes to make it keep going is so awesome...

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owlroost's avatar owlroost 1 year ago

That second stanza... that Resonated. May those that come after have bread pudding and tangerines (good taste).

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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

I love the bittersweet feeling of this poem - especially the wall of slashes at the end, the empty space is very powerful!

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hi!! i'd love to join, i've made a page here https://grlrot.neocities.org/writing :D
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tehuan's avatar tehuan 1 year ago

omg yay !! excited to have u :]] would you mind making ur page designated as /muse instead of /writing ? also totally okay to like... put /muse pages under /writing categories & stuff. just trying to maintain continuity as much as possible ! regardless, will add u soon !

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grlrot's avatar grlrot 1 year ago

it's done!! i had sm fun doing the last 3 prompts, excited for next week's!

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hi everyone! your answers for this last week's prompt were all beautiful :] i'm excited to see what you have to say about this next one! write about evolution and devolution. how do we unravel & re-ravel? think about what histories our bodies & communities & species & worlds are made of.
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Here's our prompt fill for the week of May 6th. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#trace - Efir
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ryomakesthings's avatar ryomakesthings 1 year ago

love the use of the Shakespearean sonnet and iambic pentameter, you always build such beautiful imagery in your poems. especially like the recurring contrast between the spiritual and carnal planes!

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owlroost's avatar owlroost 1 year ago

That first line? Brilliant. Got my attention immediately because of the imagery of it. The first lines for each stanza, really, but especially the very first one.

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manyface's avatar manyface 1 year ago

@ryo Thank you so much! I appreciate this. I actually read a lot of Baudelaire poems from The Flowers of Evil because @melxncholyman has a page dedicated to them, so this was sort of a response to what I read. Although, I am all about carnal spirituality! - Efir

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manyface's avatar manyface 1 year ago

@owlroost Thank you so much. I really wanted to bring the image of trace elements of decaying bodies being a part of living plants. - Efir

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