ryomakesthings
1 year ago
very powerful imagery, I really like the concept of systemhood as this river with different currents that are interconnected yet distinct from each other (that is if I read it correctly, apologies if not)!
manyface
1 year ago
@ryo you can read it however you want!! but thank you so much, i'm glad you got that image/idea from it :) there was a lot i was trying to say with this piece and i'm glad i could say at least some of it!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I really like the format, I think it really gets across this sort of dichotomy of hope and despair finding their synthesis in the compromise of existence. It's quite powerful in its simplicity, I really like it!
tehuan
1 year ago
of course !! that totally makes sense :] we hope to have you back whenever you feel like you have the capacity ! 💗
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I love the format of a bullet list, it's almost like there is no need to speak the connecting tissue out loud because it is so clear in its essence. lovely poem as always!
manyface
1 year ago
thank you so much ryo!!! i'm so glad the format worked as intended hehe, being a part of muse ariadne and seeing how differently people format their work makes us wanna experiment more!! - j
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I like how raw and 'unclean' the feeling you're communicating is, kind of like those thoughts that we find too ugly or shameful to share despite being very common and human. I really like the format too, and the contrast created by the differing lengths of the two paragraphs!
manyface
1 year ago
RYO THIS IS THE COOLEST THING WE'VE SEEN FROM YOU. IT'S SO COOL WE ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Really loved your characterizations of different runners. I'm a beginner!
@lostletters thank you so much - and nice, always great to hear about more people picking up the sport!
i just went through reading all of ur previous works and wow. WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW YOUR WORK IS SO GOOD!!!!
@symphonic thank you!! that's really flattering, so glad you enjoyed my work :)