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i haven't shared my entries here yet because i've been shy, but i'm particularly proud of this one https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse8
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new entry! inspired by a dream i had last night https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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tehuan
8 months ago
i love this! sort of ominous feeling but also feels like a friend telling you a story
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owlroost
8 months ago
Those sorts of dreams are why I keep a dream journal- helps with letting the feelings lingering from it go. Can definitely relate.
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posted my entry for this week's prompt. nothing too crazy, just a stream of consciousness but 2nd person hits different https://melxncholyman.neocities.org/muse
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owlroost
8 months ago
This is stunning- love the use of Greek. I could see this as a song (honestly, I'm a little tempted to ask you if I could put it to music).
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owlroost
8 months ago
Just did the sample recording- I think this is going to be neat. I leaned into glitchy effects for the repeated bits of text.
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angelogistics
8 months ago
obsessed with being thrust into other people's perspectives/ worlds when they write in second person, great job putting me in a new place :o) <3
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i completely forgot to actually post the prompt yesterday! sorry about that 😅 here's this week's prompt though! try writing in the second person. address your audience and sit with them as you tell your story. see how this direct connection affects how you write.
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i'd love to join! here's my page https://moondvsted.neocities.org/writing/muse/ and my button https://f2.toyhou.se/file/f2-toyhou-se/images/47052159_rd5iWTFAMmQWrMr.gif ^_^
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This was a fun one. I'm not sure if i strictly adhered to the prompt necessarily but it was nice https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/
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kph
8 months ago
love love LOVE this. love how thoughtful it is without judging the memory morphing as good or bad. love the phrase "dawn-bright loam". thanks for sharing!
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kph
8 months ago
also showed this to my gf who started gardening in the past couple years and she loves it too
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commemorative-ghosts
8 months ago
This is gorgeous; it reminds me of how our experience with things changes as we age, such as with a favourite childhood film as an adult, and the cycle of rediscovery.
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I posted my prompt fill for this week. I'm not sure if I quite suceeded at blending 2 senses though but it was fun https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/
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inkcaps
8 months ago
The image in the first few stanzas are so striking!! * __ * You really succeeded in capturing how scent is tied so closely to memory!!
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kph
8 months ago
the straightforwardness of this is very clean, very powerful. it feels like a monologue, almost, a warning with weight from the line breaks. i like how it closes and ends with 'you never forget the smell'--giving it the definite article and repetition instead of a description
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I've loved all of the prompts, but I've been swamped all month! Finished up and posted the piece I started for the feb(!!) echo prompt, hopefully freeing myself from the "oh god i can't read anyone else's before I write my version what if i can never have an original idea" cycle. Looking forward to catching up on folks' writings!
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owlroost
8 months ago
Hey, if it's any comfort, I read other people's pieces all the time before writing my own. It prompts me to think about the prompt in new ways, which gives me a more original idea than what I started with!
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percevalprintpress
8 months ago
Just read your prompt for this week - loved it especially the last few lines!
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oh lovely :)
I love it! Rainy mornings are my favorite
this is so wonderful :] i love the phrase 'this is yours to drink in'