ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I think you encapsulated perfectly the idea of adulthood as compromise, there is something so beautiful about how you used such a small moment in daily life to communicate a strong concept!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
absolutely love the imagery you built, the visual element was a really nice touch!
manyface
1 year ago
i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
what a beautiful monologue - really love the images you built through your prose!
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
that's honestly so impressive! your choice of words and structure feel very carefully thought-out, I really like how it flows!
this is remarkable. your writing is remarkable.
this is such a strong and vulnerable piece of writing - thank you so much for sharing it with us, this is beyond beautiful!