Ok updated with another poem that's actually in 2nd person!! Yay

both of these are wonderful ! i love how sort of targeted they feel.. v cool :]

i love love love this... the crawling into skull part is so real and i love the imagery you present. brain wetsuits!!!

ohhhhh you scratch my brain so well i hope i get the honor of being a recognized patron at your fishmarket :o) gonna go read all your stuff hehe

i loveeeed the sensory experience of this ! so cool

oh lovely :)

I love it! Rainy mornings are my favorite

this is so wonderful :] i love the phrase 'this is yours to drink in'

i love this! sort of ominous feeling but also feels like a friend telling you a story

Those sorts of dreams are why I keep a dream journal- helps with letting the feelings lingering from it go. Can definitely relate.

Vivid and succinct. I especially enjoy the use of repetition.

oh this is so wonderful. chills is v correct that it's so vivid!

This is stunning- love the use of Greek. I could see this as a song (honestly, I'm a little tempted to ask you if I could put it to music).

@owlroost omg—you have my full permission to do so, i would be honoured

Just did the sample recording- I think this is going to be neat. I leaned into glitchy effects for the repeated bits of text.

Really love it!

obsessed with being thrust into other people's perspectives/ worlds when they write in second person, great job putting me in a new place :o) <3

ofc !! will add you rn :]]

love love LOVE this. love how thoughtful it is without judging the memory morphing as good or bad. love the phrase "dawn-bright loam". thanks for sharing!

also showed this to my gf who started gardening in the past couple years and she loves it too

This is gorgeous; it reminds me of how our experience with things changes as we age, such as with a favourite childhood film as an adult, and the cycle of rediscovery.

adore it. the stew imagery is absolutely lovely

i love this so much!! super nice imagery :]