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this week's fill! i love the imagery of the oroborous (the serpent that eats his tail) and decided to write a little poem. I'm not great with rhyming so I think it sounds a little clunky, but I would love to turn this one into a song once day, maybe with the last stanza as the chorus! https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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did my prompt for the week !! its a little unconventional, but i ended up combining two prompts, because i hadnt written anything for weeek 23 and when i saw what week 24 was for i immediately was inspired :>> so enjoy https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-23&24
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tehuan
11 months ago
AHH this is so cool & i love that you fucked around with two prompts at once !! awesome move :]
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
that last line hits hard, I love your version of it. I get the sense of an ember of hope burning through the desperation and exhaustion. Great work!
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manyface
11 months ago
this is so awesome, i really liked it. it's so powerful and heavy and tender all at once!
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i did this week's prompt! i translated a poem from russian :) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#translation - j
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
thank you for sharing this with us, it's a very powerful and evocative poem - can't speak for the original piece but it's a great translation, I'm sure the former is just as biting!
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manyface
11 months ago
@xalli @ryo thank you so much!! that means a lot to me! translating stuff is fun, especially when you get to play with it a little! :D
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manyface
11 months ago
@caesthoffe thank you so much!! after writing, i was delighted to learn that nobody has ever translated this particular poem before i did (and if they did, it's not online) - j
new prompt posted for this week !!
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just posted the latest prompt - I really like how this one came out, felt like experimenting with new formats. https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/
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vagueshape
11 months ago
this was so fun to read!!! i really like the formatting of this one, i think its so unique
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manyface
11 months ago
this was so cute and cool!! we liked this a lot, you're so creative with all the different formats you use! - j and shades
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hi!! i've finally made my muse page and i'd love to join your club :) muse page can be found here https://shibardnek.neocities.org/muse and i have a button on my main page here https://shibardnek.neocities.org/main
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i did the prompt for this week (stones) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#stones and j did the prompt of the week of march 25th (second person) https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#you. - shades
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
July 8th is probably one of my favourite poems I've seen from you guys - so, so very powerful and I adore the direction in which you took the prompt. also love the format of march 25th!
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manyface
11 months ago
thank you so much, ryo. that means a lot to me - i am very glad my words resonated with you. - shades
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I've finally starting writing again! Mine for this week is short: a haiku https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
I love haikus! I really like how you interpreted the prompt, it's a very unique concept and you put it very well - I can almost hear a clock ticking faintly in the distance. really like it!
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manyface
11 months ago
this is great, thank you so much for sharing. i like how it has a twist despite being so concise. it's powerful. - shades
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percevalprintpress
11 months ago
thank you!! yes I always try to challenge myself to end a haiku with a new meaning/twist
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finally answered the prompt from last week - it's rather short but it felt right in the moment. https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/
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manyface
11 months ago
ryo, this is beautiful and very potent. it gives me the impression of an ancient message carved into stone, lost to eternity and found millennia later. - shades
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I like this, in a sense it feels like an ode to life itself in all its facets through the cyclicality of the oroborous. I think your passion for its imagery shines through very clearly!
this made me smile a lot as i read it. i like the ouroboros too and this poem felt so earnestly joyful and appreciative of the cyclicality of the cosmos!
loveeee your choice of language, feels very flowy and powerful at the same time :))
oh this is so gorgeous n i Def feel like it could make such a cool song !!