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this week's fill! POV: My Dog (includes an obligatory picture of my dog) https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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here's our prompt fill for this last week! from the perspective of a speck of glass in the road. https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#perspective - j
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hi y'all ! i wanted to apologize for not being consistent about posting the prompts these last couple weeks-- it's been very busy as i prepare for the start of school & try to figure out finishing up this internship ! that said, the new prompt is posted and i hope you all enjoy :]
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heres my fill for this last weeks prompt !! warning for some implied sexual content https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-26
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manyface
11 months ago
this is a wonderful poem and i can feel your expression of pride through the words and images! i especially like that third stanza! :)
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
it's always a very lovely experience to see other people expressing pride in their own way, and I think you did so very effectively with your imagery. there is this sort of soft joy about it that I really like, almost like gentle breeze through an open window - good work!
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hi, here's my response to this week's prompt! it's based on that fairytale where the girl has to make nettle shirts for her seven brothers to turn them back into humans (from swans). https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#clothes - j
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caesthoffe
11 months ago
ive never heard of that story, but holy fuck your imagery is soooo vivid i might as well have been there. love the vocabuulary you used :0
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manyface
11 months ago
@caesthoffe thank you so much!! there are a lot of variants of the story, i was surprised to see just how many there are when i was refreshing myself on the premise. i think i know the story from a soviet cartoon?
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
really love how compact and punchy this poem is - completely agree with caesthoffe that the imagery is stunning!
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manyface
11 months ago
@ryo thank you!!! it was the sort of thing that came to me as i was trying to sleep and i had to get up to write it down, haha!
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wowowow so glad i stumbled upon this so i could find more writers on here!!!
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hi y’all ! sorry i didn’t get to posting a prompt yesterday— it was a Very long day. this week’s prompt is “write about the feeling of clothes on a body— the way it fits & feels, and what each material inspires.” will update the site itself soon !!
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I continue to like prose poetry a bit too much (and interpret prompts sideways- it's working, though!). https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#break
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
I really appreciate the honesty and self-awareness of this piece, I especially like how you called back to your earlier poems. I love the imagery of the porch in the middle!
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owlroost
11 months ago
Something I've been doing with Muse pieces in general is callbacks! Usually via metaphors echoing forwards. I find it fun and it inspires me to find ways to connect them.
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manyface
11 months ago
this is really beautiful!!! i loved reading it! thank you so much for sharing, the imagery was fantastic and dazzling!
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wrote my first poem in a long while. i saw a prompt about breaking away from things and asked myself why ive broken away from this ritual itself, and many others i set for myself. that's what this is about https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/
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ryomakesthings
11 months ago
there is a lot of honesty in this piece that is very well-balanced with a certain artistic flair. I really like the format of the Shakespearean sonnet and the rhyme scheme, I think it adds to the musicality of the piece quite well!
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caesthoffe
11 months ago
incredibly relatable, love your use of Icarion as a word. also, don't know if you did this on purpose but "i pray everyday for my body to align with the plans i fashion in my mind" is very tran/non-binary coded, which i loved.
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owlroost
11 months ago
Sometimes you read the first line of a poem and know it'll be good. This is one of those poems. The rest followed through, but that first line is going to stick with me.
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manyface
11 months ago
this was wonderful and relatable... i loved the rhyme scheme and the overall sentiment. i like that it seemed to be positive at the end, there is hope! remember to take care of yourself.
this piece is so cute and sweet and touching! and so is your dog! what is their name?
@manyface her name is molly :) she's 14 years old
awwwwh she's so adorable !! and this piece is such a lovely portrait of her :]