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here's my fill for this week's prompt!! https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#asymmetry - j
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new prompt filllll :3 https://caesthoffe.neocities.org/writing/muse#week-13
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ryomakesthings
4 months ago
I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!
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manyface
4 months ago
this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D
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hi! i'd love to join! my button is on my site's main page, and my muse page is on my site's "map". I had a lot of fun writing for this weeks prompt ^^ https://cassava.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
4 months ago
I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!
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manyface
4 months ago
oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.
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i got to finishing last week's prompt :] https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse12 I also rewrote the April 1 prompt https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse9 they're both kinda rambley, but i'm trying to get back into the swing of writing
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ryomakesthings
4 months ago
these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!
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here's what i wrote for this week :) https://mism4tchedsocks.neocities.org/crea/muse/ i'm not sure if it fits exactly but it was fun to write!
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the-chavez-zone
4 months ago
i adore how the formatting elevates the feeling of the piece :] I love it
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hello i would love to join! i made a muse page that can be found on my link page, as well as my button!
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finally sat down and wrote my prompt fills for the past couple weeks i've missed, plus this new one !! :] https://tehuan.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
5 months ago
there is so much love and peace coming through in your poems, even when you express a certain grief. it makes for a really cozy experience as a reader, really like them!
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manyface
5 months ago
i really enjoyed your prompt fills for the wordpool week and the transition week! they were so beautiful, your writing is both delicate and strong. - j
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hello lovelies ! we've got a new prompt up for this week :] i hope you enjoy: write about or use asymmetry in your writing. what is the intrigue in imbalance? maybe work with different-sized stanzas or long, long sentences followed by short ones, or think about how no two bodies are the same, nor two halves of the same body, or how the feeling of a painting shifts with where the objects sit.
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here's my prompt fill for this week! please watch out if you read it though, it's very much about childhood trauma :00 https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#transition - therry
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percevalprintpress
5 months ago
This is really moving, I love how it starts and ends with the same line
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manyface
5 months ago
@percevalprintpress thank you!!! though, the lines are slightly different! - j and therry
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ryomakesthings
5 months ago
your use of enjambment is inspired, you have a way of moving readers from one line to the next that works so well. incredible poem!
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manyface
5 months ago
@symphonic thank you!!! therry wanted to write about our first transition between system hosts, we hope it resonates :0 - j
"love scares me when all i have known is asymmetry" hits way too close to home. what a creative definition!!
thank you!!! it's all true :')
this is such an impressive poem - love the contrast between the inner world of the piece and the mathematical language!
@ryo thank you so much!!! i love writing mathsy poetry :D