i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]
I love the kindness and growth shining through in this, really like the format too!
this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer
beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!
"love scares me when all i have known is asymmetry" hits way too close to home. what a creative definition!!
this is such an impressive poem - love the contrast between the inner world of the piece and the mathematical language!
I think the empty space to the right is really adding something to the piece. what a fun format, didn't know it was called that!
this is such a creative way to interpret the prompt! i liked your poem a lot !!! :D
I actually think you used the prompt as a jumping-off point very well - you explored the idea of asymmetry as a discrepancy between previously and currently held notions beautifully. it's a strong piece, love the final line!
oh this is amazing!!! i really enjoyed your exploration of the prompt actually, i think there is a certain asymmetry in growing up and filling the space that opens up to you.
these pieces really struck a chord - they feel like someone discovering their own mortality for the first time in practice, which is something both relevant and hard to capture. great job!
i adore how the formatting elevates the feeling of the piece :] I love it
yay, lovely !! i'll add you soon :] and the new prompt will be up soon !
actually, would you be able to tag your writing page as /muse? it's okay if it's /writings/muse if that's smth you want for organization, but i'm hoping to keep us all as cohesive as possible with our page names & all ! :]
i'll wait until you update it to put ur button on the site just so i don't have to change it again n mess with it, so just lmk when it's set up ! :]
i got it updated to be muse!
well, writings/muse haha