oh i adore this!! your writing is so visual and flows so beautifully! i kept getting stuck on every line and wanting to live in it.
I love the hope that comes through in this piece, the idea that absence can symbolise not only what was lost but also what can be gained in its place - at least, that's what I got from it. I especially like the final line!
@grlrot Thank you so much. I am sure Charlize would greatly appreciate that compliment - it's a beautiful way to phrase that sentiment, too! - Efir
@ryo Yes, that is what Charlize intended to write into this piece - the absence of fear, of fury, of hatred, manifesting as the love that fills the empty space. Thank you so much for your compliments! - Efir
this was very beautiful!! thank you for sharing and we hope it all feels a little lighter sometimes,
this is such a raw and honest poem, and a very well-crafted one at that. It's almost like I can feel the weight of their absence myself, great job and hope you're doing well!
this was very beautiful and very sad!!! i think about this sort of thing a lot too.. - charlize
incredible poem, and very bittersweet - it speaks to absence in the purest sense of the word, as something immaterial that lingers in the ether. I like it a lot!
i ADOREEEE this poem so much oh my god, this is such a creative way to format
@caesthoffe thank you so much hehe!!! i got inspired by a writing workshop i went to :3
absolutely adore the format, I think you captured perfectly how haunting digital ghosts can feel. really resonate with the part about 'personality in bite-sized pieces'!
@ryo Thank you so much! We are glad you like it, J felt pretty clever about that line, ahaha! - Efir
thanks for sharing this with us!! it is really nice to hear that your travel anxiety no longer remains !
what a beautiful reflection, and a very interesting interpretation of the prompt!
i really liked reading this!! thank you so much for sharing, it's very bittersweet!
for sure! i get it :] feel free to rejoin if you'd like to at some point ! we'd love to have you back
my button for my site is on my home page under the updates box!
yay ! so happy to have you. and omg of course !! you're free to answer as many old prompts as you'd like :] the point of this club is to inspire & create community above all else !
@tehuan thank you so much! :D