love the sonnet structure and the story - they mesh really well together!
i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)
what a beautiful monologue - really love the images you built through your prose!
that's honestly so impressive! your choice of words and structure feel very carefully thought-out, I really like how it flows!
absolutely love the imagery you built, the visual element was a really nice touch!
ough that is DELECTABLE, very beautiful
this is so lovely and just. immaculate. it's a wonderful piece!!
oh wow. this is SO good
Wow this is really beautiful!!