what a beautiful monologue - really love the images you built through your prose!
that's honestly so impressive! your choice of words and structure feel very carefully thought-out, I really like how it flows!
love how evocative they all are - you really brought their individual worlds to life!
love the sonnet structure and the story - they mesh really well together!
i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)