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posted a poem for this week’s prompt. inspired by my home country which you can infer from the references. i don’t have my computer with me so a simple html page it will be for now. https://melxncholyman.neocities.org/hooves
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here's my prompt fill for this week! i'm very pleased with the triple acrostic structure i used, hehe :D https://manyface.neocities.org/muse#fractal - j
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ryomakesthings
3 months ago
absolutely love the format! very effective choice to have no punctuation, it makes the abundant imagery all the more potent!
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manyface
3 months ago
thank you so much ryo!!! i was worried it would take away a lot of the clarity (not a bad thing in itself) but that that would compromise the impact. i'm glad it didn't!
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hello hello i'd like to join the writing club !! heres my link: https://venusinfoxfurs.neocities.org/other/clubs/muse. buttons can be found on my index page!
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eerm ok i saw the word break and engineer brain went brrr, i suppose you could ascribe some repetition to this piece but whoopsies i focused more on the first half than the second in this prompt! https://angelogistics.neocities.org/blog/ariadne
im quite happy with how the gentleness of this piece shook itself out, it isn't really the same vibe as my other ones with the technical terms but its kind of neat!
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manyface
3 months ago
this was so beautiful, i genuinely feel a bit tearful now! i'm really glad to have read this! thank you for sharing!
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ryomakesthings
3 months ago
this is such a well-crafted and evocative piece of writing. the last two lines especially are so powerful!
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latest prompt filled - it's a bit dark in concept (though I like to think there is humour in it too), CWs are at the top of the piece if you need to tap out! https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/clubs/muse/
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shibardnek
3 months ago
i really liked this one! it really highlights just how panicked one's anxious thoughts can become, and it really nailed it on the head with how quickly it tends to escalate too. i especially like the touch of making it a run-on.
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asters-asterisms
3 months ago
i love the rambling style of this!! i feel like it helps add to the emotion of the piece mwah
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manyface
3 months ago
i like this a lot!! it's very cool and the run on structure is excellent. great work as always, ryo!
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melxncholyman
3 months ago
really liked the escalation of scale and how you cheekily tied it back to the beginning ^^
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prompt fill for this week :) been feeling kind of stagnant lately, so this one was a nice writing warm up https://shibardnek.neocities.org/muse
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ryomakesthings
3 months ago
I really like how you focussed on not only the graduality of distress but that of hope, as well. I appreciate how it ends on a note of self-forgiveness, the whole thing put a smile on my face. the format is also very interesting!
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shibardnek
3 months ago
thank you! when writing it i was thinking of a computer terminal, and the straightforwardness of prompt fills.
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manyface
3 months ago
this was really nice to read, i'm glad there was hope as well as despair and that it all felt like a process with the best intentions of the character/voice in mind, by the end of it!
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my prompt fill for this week 🫡 https://asters-asterisms.neocities.org/home/muse/722
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manyface
4 months ago
this is so amazing... i really loved reading through it, it's beautiful and the repetition is so powerful and poignant. so proud of you for sharing this, thank you.
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ryomakesthings
3 months ago
what a beautiful and powerful lament. I love how you went down each line one at a time and how terribly human it all is. thank you for your art!
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new prompt up !!
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ohhh maybe i just love how a blank website page feels like a cathedral but this hit so hard & so well ... rlly lovely imagery ! !
@angelogistics there is something holy to be found in enclosed emptiness… thank you for the praise <3
what a beautiful and poignant poem - seconding that the imagery is stunning, you incapsulated so much history, grief and hope in a few words. thank you for sharing your artistry with us!
@ryomakesthings thank *you* for reading and appreciating!
The fractal horses of all things really connected with me. Gorgeous visuals, and it feels rooted somehow in a way that a lot of poetry doesn't.
@owlroost thank you, i had fun imagining an infinite scale of little horses heheh
this was really awesome - everybody who said that the imagery is amazing is absolutely correct. an amazing piece. thank you for sharing!