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Finally got around to this week's Muse prompt. https://owlsroost.xyz/muse.html#you
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bondiaries 1 month ago

i love love love this... the crawling into skull part is so real and i love the imagery you present. brain wetsuits!!!

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angelogistics 1 month ago

ohhhhh you scratch my brain so well i hope i get the honor of being a recognized patron at your fishmarket :o) gonna go read all your stuff hehe

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tehuan 1 month ago

i loveeeed the sensory experience of this ! so cool

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i haven't shared my entries here yet because i've been shy, but i'm particularly proud of this one https://the-chavez-zone.neocities.org/muse/muse8
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fairygore 1 month ago

oh lovely :)

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percevalprintpress 1 month ago

I love it! Rainy mornings are my favorite

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tehuan 1 month ago

this is so wonderful :] i love the phrase 'this is yours to drink in'

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new entry! inspired by a dream i had last night https://vagueshape.neocities.org/muse
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tehuan 1 month ago

i love this! sort of ominous feeling but also feels like a friend telling you a story

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owlroost 1 month ago

Those sorts of dreams are why I keep a dream journal- helps with letting the feelings lingering from it go. Can definitely relate.

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posted my entry for this week's prompt. nothing too crazy, just a stream of consciousness but 2nd person hits different https://melxncholyman.neocities.org/muse
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commemorative-ghosts 1 month ago

Vivid and succinct. I especially enjoy the use of repetition.

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tehuan 1 month ago

oh this is so wonderful. chills is v correct that it's so vivid!

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owlroost 1 month ago

This is stunning- love the use of Greek. I could see this as a song (honestly, I'm a little tempted to ask you if I could put it to music).

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melxncholyman 1 month ago

@owlroost omg—you have my full permission to do so, i would be honoured

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owlroost 1 month ago

Just did the sample recording- I think this is going to be neat. I leaned into glitchy effects for the repeated bits of text.

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angelogistics 1 month ago

obsessed with being thrust into other people's perspectives/ worlds when they write in second person, great job putting me in a new place :o) <3

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i completely forgot to actually post the prompt yesterday! sorry about that 😅 here's this week's prompt though! try writing in the second person. address your audience and sit with them as you tell your story. see how this direct connection affects how you write.
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museariadne 1 month ago

ofc !! will add you rn :]]

This was a fun one. I'm not sure if i strictly adhered to the prompt necessarily but it was nice https://siph.neocities.org/library/muse/
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kph 1 month ago

love love LOVE this. love how thoughtful it is without judging the memory morphing as good or bad. love the phrase "dawn-bright loam". thanks for sharing!

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kph 1 month ago

also showed this to my gf who started gardening in the past couple years and she loves it too

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commemorative-ghosts 1 month ago

This is gorgeous; it reminds me of how our experience with things changes as we age, such as with a favourite childhood film as an adult, and the cycle of rediscovery.

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melxncholyman 1 month ago

adore it. the stew imagery is absolutely lovely

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tehuan 1 month ago

i love this so much!! super nice imagery :]

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I posted my prompt fill for this week. I'm not sure if I quite suceeded at blending 2 senses though but it was fun https://percevalprintpress.neocities.org/writing/muse/
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inkcaps 1 month ago

The image in the first few stanzas are so striking!! * __ * You really succeeded in capturing how scent is tied so closely to memory!!

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kph 1 month ago

the straightforwardness of this is very clean, very powerful. it feels like a monologue, almost, a warning with weight from the line breaks. i like how it closes and ends with 'you never forget the smell'--giving it the definite article and repetition instead of a description

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kph 1 month ago

like you would with a horror movie monster

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tehuan 1 month ago

you definitely did :] i love this specific twist on it !

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