I really like the choice of formatting it as a prayer, it's a real bittersweet poem in that sense - how it speaks to a certain hope within the desperation and grief. great job!
this is extremely beautiful, i love it so much. pj strikes once again with poetry that speaks to my soul - j
damn i'm so sorry that sucks!!! i really hope you're not in pain for long. i hope things look up for you soon again!! sending you hugs if you want!! - j
@manyface, thank u! btw thank u for the kind comment on my guestbook too :)
this is an incredible piece, it's so reverent and intense and full of emotion. you are an amazing writer
beautiful work, there is so much life and detail in your writing. thank you for sharing!
changed the font bc lucida console hurts my eyes