LOL meant to reply to this a few days ago but yes! im glad you like him ^_^
ever since i found ur site, the phrase "the puns are shaking their g-string clad booties at us" has never once left my head; god i even started saying it irl lololololol
@koshka ty! :D https://holeinmyheart.neocities.org/blog/mathman/quickresponse1.txt
Now that you mention the setting, it's possible that her dialogue IS more realistic than I thought, given that everyone spoke in a more sophisticated and educated manner back then. And yeah, I saw the image, which was helpful!
EXCELLENT work on that last chapter, my friend! I sincerely apologise that I still haven't posted my notes on that. Have had no time/energy lately but I will get those written up tonight.
@koshka no rush! read at ur preferred rate/time :P. I'm gonna upload the next part tmrw
https://koshka.love/holeinmyheart3.txt FINALLY put it up. I can't wait to see the next part. The preview you presented is enthralling enough without all of the masterful build-up that you already created in the story. (:
o & typos fixed, ty. "lock" was intentional, as in when u "lock in" to something. but im gonna try rephrasing it in a less confusing way/
also, if you wanna skip around & just jump into the middle of the story, go ahead
oops. you can reply here if u want. 1 thing i said was i lol'd at how chapter 3 of billy just casually starts with a hospital shootout
that makes me happy, thank you lol