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In reply to your query: NORP life is tearing me apart.
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NOETM day 2 coming this weekend! preview: https://holeinmyheart.neocities.org/blog/mathman/day2preview.png
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koshka
3 years ago
EXCELLENT work on that last chapter, my friend! I sincerely apologise that I still haven't posted my notes on that. Have had no time/energy lately but I will get those written up tonight.
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holeinmyheart
3 years ago
@koshka no rush! read at ur preferred rate/time :P. I'm gonna upload the next part tmrw
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koshka
3 years ago
https://koshka.love/holeinmyheart3.txt FINALLY put it up. I can't wait to see the next part. The preview you presented is enthralling enough without all of the masterful build-up that you already created in the story. (:
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holeinmyheart
3 years ago
o & typos fixed, ty. "lock" was intentional, as in when u "lock in" to something. but im gonna try rephrasing it in a less confusing way/
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holeinmyheart
3 years ago
also, if you wanna skip around & just jump into the middle of the story, go ahead
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HELLLLLLLLP D: https://a.cockfile.com/hHdWJv.webm
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antikrist
3 years ago
yes im aware of this LOL ive been working on a new layout thats a little easier to navigate. ive just gotten back into coding since 10 years ago! so ive forgotten how to do a lot of things haha. thank you for the comment though! :)
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sprry for the reorganizing/editing disaster. i'm finally done https://holeinmyheart.neocities.org/blog/mathman/mathman_day1.html
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koshka
3 years ago
Simply incredible!!! Read it multiple times and loved it all the way through each time! Wrote up some more detailed notes here: https://koshka.love/holeinmyheart2.txt
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holeinmyheart
3 years ago
@koshka ty, i love reading your comments! will get those errors fixed in a bit
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I put together a few notes on the first part of your wonderful creepypasta: https://koshka.love/holeinmyheart1.txt Belated happy birthday (again) to your awesome site, my friend!!
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holeinmyheart
3 years ago
OMG TY TY! so fun to see what people liked! ty for the feedback, i'll fix the mistakes & upload the next part in a bit.
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lhfm
3 years ago
Nice nice. This part is some Heart of Darkness shit where the main narrator is telling the story of another narrator haha
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koshka
3 years ago
I LOVED it, and can't wait for the next part of the story!!! I'll write a more verbose review once I'm sober, but for now, thank you kindly for sharing this. You are one heck of a writer. (:
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the whole world felt.
Superb, as always!! https://koshka.love/holeinmyheart4.txt
@koshka ty! :D https://holeinmyheart.neocities.org/blog/mathman/quickresponse1.txt
Now that you mention the setting, it's possible that her dialogue IS more realistic than I thought, given that everyone spoke in a more sophisticated and educated manner back then. And yeah, I saw the image, which was helpful!