Simply incredible!!! Read it multiple times and loved it all the way through each time! Wrote up some more detailed notes here: https://koshka.love/holeinmyheart2.txt
@koshka ty, i love reading your comments! will get those errors fixed in a bit
OMG TY TY! so fun to see what people liked! ty for the feedback, i'll fix the mistakes & upload the next part in a bit.
Nice nice. This part is some Heart of Darkness shit where the main narrator is telling the story of another narrator haha
I LOVED it, and can't wait for the next part of the story!!! I'll write a more verbose review once I'm sober, but for now, thank you kindly for sharing this. You are one heck of a writer. (:
i tried on palemoon & firefox. i like your blog posts btw
Oh also same thing "LINKS" section
yes im aware of this LOL ive been working on a new layout thats a little easier to navigate. ive just gotten back into coding since 10 years ago! so ive forgotten how to do a lot of things haha. thank you for the comment though! :)