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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

You ask the laymen as if I have any clue what is going on anymore, and am not just reading because I love your writing style, lol. β±­:

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

You have an incredible way with words, as always, my friend. I love your ability to paint mental pictures. I admit I thought you were talking about drugs at first though, when you said "getting demolished on products", lol.

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

Excellent writing once again. A few possible errors: "starting through and beyond" instead of "staring" and a possible extra and in "and and the man stood over"? I laughed at the "what I'm going to do is decompose" line until I looked down and saw you were talking about the mathematiocs. For some reason that just sounds like a hilarious expression of desperation.

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

I adored the opening parts of this write-up especially. Very eloquently written. I sort of feel sometimes as if I am reading the diary of some mathematics-obsessed madman in an old timey classical novel. I mean that in a very positive way, just so you know. (:

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

*Mathematics, even. Dammit. The old rule that it's impossible to point out a typo without making one yourself still rings true.

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holeinmyheart's avatar holeinmyheart 4 years ago

"mathematiocs" - sounds like some continental philosophy jargon

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didntask's avatar didntask 4 years ago

But it makes me wanna puke, yo.

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kazuhisa's avatar kazuhisa 4 years ago

now then, my sons, listen to me; pay attention to what I say. Do not let your heart turn to Tessie's ways or stray into Tessie's paths. Many are the victims she has brought down; her slain are a mighty throng. Her house is a highway to the grave, leading down to the chambers of death

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hifumeme's avatar hifumeme 4 years ago

I find it funny how you have like 3 writing styles: 1) plain/formal writing, 2) unhinged maniac, and 3) 2000s teenage girl

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burypink's avatar burypink 4 years ago

you mentioned infinite sums for 1 second and i started thinking "im doing it!!! im understanding a hartshorned post!!!" but alas ;_; the shorned is too strong

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

I ADORE the "Who makes themselves felt on the President's desk on the morning-of?" and "The whole floor, and the members of the gallery all raise their heads, like ghoulish gooses in a nightlit pond watching dancing skylights." lines, along with the rest of this! You have a way with words, as usual.

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

Really love your writing although I sometimes struggle to tell where the seriousness ends and where the eldritch lunacy begins. I sincerely hope you feel much better soon, my friend.

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hifumeme's avatar hifumeme 4 years ago

For the record this is very sweet, and I appreciate that you wrote this little poem, Holy-Heart.

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

That is so sweet! β±­:

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koshka's avatar koshka 4 years ago

I don't know what I just read, but I loved it. Your unique writing style never fails to amuse. Fill-her-up Fuchsia made me laugh, among other lines. One minor thing - it looks like the date on the top of the page is "1/31/2021" instead of "2/4/2022"...

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holeinmyheart's avatar holeinmyheart 4 years ago

@koshka fixed, ty. I think I've messed up every date so far.....

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