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koshka 2 years ago

Excellent writing once again. A few possible errors: "starting through and beyond" instead of "staring" and a possible extra and in "and and the man stood over"? I laughed at the "what I'm going to do is decompose" line until I looked down and saw you were talking about the mathematiocs. For some reason that just sounds like a hilarious expression of desperation.

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koshka 2 years ago

I adored the opening parts of this write-up especially. Very eloquently written. I sort of feel sometimes as if I am reading the diary of some mathematics-obsessed madman in an old timey classical novel. I mean that in a very positive way, just so you know. (:

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koshka 2 years ago

*Mathematics, even. Dammit. The old rule that it's impossible to point out a typo without making one yourself still rings true.

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holeinmyheart 2 years ago

"mathematiocs" - sounds like some continental philosophy jargon

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didntask 2 years ago

But it makes me wanna puke, yo.

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kazuhisa 2 years ago

now then, my sons, listen to me; pay attention to what I say. Do not let your heart turn to Tessie's ways or stray into Tessie's paths. Many are the victims she has brought down; her slain are a mighty throng. Her house is a highway to the grave, leading down to the chambers of death

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