EXCELLENT rhythm and rhyming scheme, and it's always impressive to see a clean line break on the word "but" imo. the fifth stanza got me tearing up and struggling to keep reading it aloud without my voice breaking, and five stanzas is SO clever i didn't even notice until i counted them out to reference the fifth. and your word choice is amazing, the math alliterations were so clever
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EXCELLENT rhythm and rhyming scheme, and it's always impressive to see a clean line break on the word "but" imo. the fifth stanza got me tearing up and struggling to keep reading it aloud without my voice breaking, and five stanzas is SO clever i didn't even notice until i counted them out to reference the fifth. and your word choice is amazing, the math alliterations were so clever