ryomakesthings
1 year ago
I like this, in a sense it feels like an ode to life itself in all its facets through the cyclicality of the oroborous. I think your passion for its imagery shines through very clearly!
manyface
1 year ago
this made me smile a lot as i read it. i like the ouroboros too and this poem felt so earnestly joyful and appreciative of the cyclicality of the cosmos!
caesthoffe
1 year ago
loveeee your choice of language, feels very flowy and powerful at the same time :))
ryomakesthings
1 year ago
thank you for sharing this, I can really feel the imprint that your grandmother left in that space - I don't think the departed's spaces could ever not be theirs anymore, and I believe you put that into words beautifully. hope you're doing well!
manyface
1 year ago
i can definitely relate to this one, and i hope you're doing alright! your writing is very sincere and bittersweet, so thank you so much for sharing it! - j
for reference, i used catbox, but trying uploads from imgbb seems to have the same issue
it looks fine on my end, maybe try reloading the page with ctrl+f5? sometimes that does it for me when a page is being stingy :/
@alicebluef0f8ff thank god! it seems to just be on my end then. ctrl+f5 doesn't fix it, but I can work around it. thank you!
hmm yeah it's also fine for me !!