I like this, in a sense it feels like an ode to life itself in all its facets through the cyclicality of the oroborous. I think your passion for its imagery shines through very clearly!
this made me smile a lot as i read it. i like the ouroboros too and this poem felt so earnestly joyful and appreciative of the cyclicality of the cosmos!
loveeee your choice of language, feels very flowy and powerful at the same time :))
thank you for sharing this, I can really feel the imprint that your grandmother left in that space - I don't think the departed's spaces could ever not be theirs anymore, and I believe you put that into words beautifully. hope you're doing well!
i can definitely relate to this one, and i hope you're doing alright! your writing is very sincere and bittersweet, so thank you so much for sharing it! - j
for reference, i used catbox, but trying uploads from imgbb seems to have the same issue
it looks fine on my end, maybe try reloading the page with ctrl+f5? sometimes that does it for me when a page is being stingy :/
@alicebluef0f8ff thank god! it seems to just be on my end then. ctrl+f5 doesn't fix it, but I can work around it. thank you!
hmm yeah it's also fine for me !!