i have a complete draft of the issue, so now what i want to do is try "revising".it is probably clear, but usually, I just make the draft and then draw it, without an intermediate phase, this time I want it to be more enjoyable to read. 13 pages to draft but this expects to be subject to change hopefully for larger number. will probably not reach 30s since is a shorter story
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i have a complete draft of the issue, so now what i want to do is try "revising".it is probably clear, but usually, I just make the draft and then draw it, without an intermediate phase, this time I want it to be more enjoyable to read. 13 pages to draft but this expects to be subject to change hopefully for larger number. will probably not reach 30s since is a shorter story