ooo i love how you phrased this, it's simple but evocative. "everything of the world, and nothing of myself" is such a good line.
love love LOVE the structure, repetition is one of my favorite poettic devices !!!
this is an excellent poem, it's really punchy and gets the message across beautifully without being too forceful... well done!!
i love how it says so much with just a handful of words! i love the contrast! incredible :]
wow!!! that's really cool, please post it!! i am actually really touched, that's so wonderful!!! - j
@nohappynonsense not currently but was thinking about it, will probably sort that out soon!
Sounds good - I really like some of your pieces and would definitely be interested!
this is really nice and bittersweet, im no poetry expert but i love the way you structured this. simple and poignant, i love it
perfect! would love to join then, my page is https://ryomakesthings.neocities.org/bookbug
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