Posted my notes from underground bookbug thoughts. I've been sick for 2 weeks so trying to update things now
this is so beautiful and vulnerable, you put so well into words the aftermath of a kind of liminal grief. thank you for sharing!
love the sonnet structure and the story - they mesh really well together!
i like this work a lot!!! it's very different to my poem, but that's okay! i love seeing all the responses :)
love how evocative they all are - you really brought their individual worlds to life!
it's incredible how much soul you can condense in shorter pieces, your last entry is very bittersweet. also in love with last week's prompt, came out really well!
@ryomakesthings Thank you!! Most of my poems start out longer and I cut them down in editing but this is also me being obsessive about making every word have a meaning