That should cover more of the glaring issues with the previous chapters. I probably still missed a few typos but the glaring one should be fixed. I wished libreoffice had a better autocorrect. But at least for now, I can eventually move onto the new chapters.
Going through the first five chapters to correct typos. Will do the same for the other chapters before moving on. Not to many changes but there were a few retcons here and there that didn't make sense so I had to fix those too.
I also have a pretty bad habbit of capitalizing my nouns like in the German language. But I think the biggest sin I committed in the English language was getting Hikari and Chiara's names mixed up in the first few chapters.
I rly love that napkin holder detail, I'm literally doing it rn ðŸ˜and of course she'd improve the YouTube app