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That should cover more of the glaring issues with the previous chapters. I probably still missed a few typos but the glaring one should be fixed. I wished libreoffice had a better autocorrect. But at least for now, I can eventually move onto the new chapters.

Going through the first five chapters to correct typos. Will do the same for the other chapters before moving on. Not to many changes but there were a few retcons here and there that didn't make sense so I had to fix those too.

I also have a pretty bad habbit of capitalizing my nouns like in the German language. But I think the biggest sin I committed in the English language was getting Hikari and Chiara's names mixed up in the first few chapters.

A little audio test, Hikari and Mai enter Flint's Gun Store: https://voca.ro/1n83w3t9QGt8

Also, I'm probably going to take a small break after the Battle of the Woods section is done. I need to go back and fix typos, errors, and formatting problems in earlier chapters. I noticed them when I put everything into Libreoffice. I plan on making the story into a Epub format when it's all done.

This kind of an issue that's been plaguing my other stuff too. I write my story in html format which doesn't give me access to autocorrect so I'm typing away, slip up or don't think and then when everything is published, I miss out on stuff unless I go through my texts and paragraphs.