Going through the first five chapters to correct typos. Will do the same for the other chapters before moving on. Not to many changes but there were a few retcons here and there that didn't make sense so I had to fix those too.

I also have a pretty bad habbit of capitalizing my nouns like in the German language. But I think the biggest sin I committed in the English language was getting Hikari and Chiara's names mixed up in the first few chapters.