Going through the first five chapters to correct typos. Will do the same for the other chapters before moving on. Not to many changes but there were a few retcons here and there that didn't make sense so I had to fix those too.
I also have a pretty bad habbit of capitalizing my nouns like in the German language. But I think the biggest sin I committed in the English language was getting Hikari and Chiara's names mixed up in the first few chapters.
Going through the first five chapters to correct typos. Will do the same for the other chapters before moving on. Not to many changes but there were a few retcons here and there that didn't make sense so I had to fix those too.
I also have a pretty bad habbit of capitalizing my nouns like in the German language. But I think the biggest sin I committed in the English language was getting Hikari and Chiara's names mixed up in the first few chapters.